Barn party

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Hals P.O.V ~

"Tonight it like a barn party thing do you wanna go?" Becki said and we nodded

"Mmm it would be good...we haven't had a night out in ages actually!" Andrea Said and I nodded

"I've never been out with you guys!" Marcy said and I ruffled her hair.

"When we get back we will go clubbing wooooo!" I shouted and we all burst out laughing

The boys had gone to the local store to get food so only us girls were left on our own and Nick was in his and Becki's tent.

"Are you gunna ask Trevor to go with you?" Marcy asked Becki playfully and she pouted

"No, he would never want to go with me, it would he weird anyway" she said letting her fringe fall across her eyes and we smiled to each other.

"When he gets back I guarantee he will ask you and If he does can we give you a make over?" Andrea said and she sighed but you could tell she was hopeful

"Okie dokie, you can give me a makeover anyway" she said trying to nudge Andrea with her feet but her chair rocked and slipped over.

"OWWWW!" She shouted and we were in histerics laughing and almost crying

"HONEY WE'RE HOMEEEE" Connor shouted out entering the tent carrying some bags while we were playing truth or dare

"Hey hey what did you buy?" I asked and he shrugged

"Necessities" he said as the others piled in.

"Enjoying your self?" Jc asked us as we watched him carry in a crate of Arizona.

"What making you work why we out our feet up yeah we are?" I said and he smirked. God he was cute.

"Umm Becki?" Trevor asked and she looked up from her phone. Andrea nudged Marcys shoulder and Becki smiled

"Uh ya Trevor?" She said and he blushed. God that boy was a charmer.

"Can I talk to you? Like outside?" He said and we burst out laughing

"What?" He said defensively

"Our little Trevor is growing up!" Andrea said wiping away a fake tear and the boys looked clueless.

"Kk come on Becki" he said walking out the tent and Becki followed. She glanced back to us and we gave her a thumbs up to show our support!

Becki's P.O.V ~

Trevor walked for a bit away from the tent and then turned suddenly making my jump. He laughed and then sat down in some grass in front of me, I sat across from him and I glanced at his eyes. They were huge and a bright blue sparkling in the dimming sun. His blonde hair shimmered and his eyelashes were so long, I would kill for them!

"Uh Becki their is a barn party thing and I wondered if you would like to go with me?" He said and my stomach flipped. I felt my cheeks heat up and I stuttered.

"U-uh I w-ould lo-ve to go wi-wi-with you Trevor" I finally got out and he looked relived

"WOOOOOOO" he screamed getting up and jumping in the air

"What are you so excited about?" I asked and he stopped ,tilting his head slightly

"Going with you to the dance of course?" He said and I blushed again

"I'm excited too" I said timidly and he hugged me

"Can't wait to see you all prettied up" he said and as soon as he was back in the tent I let out a scream!

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I was going to the barn dance with Trevor! He ASKED me?! Oh my god I need Andrea, Marcy and Hal!

*5 hours later*

"Ow Andrea it's burning me!" I winced and and she apologised

"Sorry, it's only hairspray?" She giggled and I scowled

"Yeah but you got it in my mouth?" I said and she tried to hide her laughter

The boys had gone already so it was just us girls getting ready. Andrea had already done my make up which made me look incredibly older and was about to finished my hair. She had done a fish tail braid down the side of my head and It rested on my shoulder, and she added some pins to clip up my fringe.

"Donee" she singed out and I smiled

"Thanks!" I said and she handed me a mirror

"Oh wow! I look so different..." I said trailing and I grabbed my shorts. They had stud along the hem and I put on a under top and a white shirt that was unbuttoned, I looked relaxed.

Marcy walked out in a short black skirt and crop top. Hal walked out in a fitted dark purple and pink floral top and a black boyfriend cardigan. Andrea was last to finish and she looked stunning. Her lips were coloured a dark purple and she was wearing a galaxy crop top and short frayed shorts.

"We look good!" Marcy said surveying us and we laughed. I grabbed my phone from the picnic table and slipped into my back pocket.

"Ready?" I said and they nodded looking in the mirror for one last glance.

Gail's P,O,V ~

Everyone looked stunning! Becki looked the most changed out of all of us! Trevor has got a lucky one! I am so thankful I grabbed my dress before coming here because it's the only nice thing I brought!

We walked to the barn and we could hear the music beating from 5 minutes away. For such a secluded place it was sure popular! We walked in and it was packed with people. Becki saw Trevor straight away and ran to him. It was so sweet he kissed her on the cheek and she blushed, he obviously told her she looked gorgeous. We saw Kian, Sam and Jc dancing in the middle and we made are way through the crowd to them.

"You look beautiful" Jc whispered in my ear when we got to them and I blushed kissing him.

"Where's Connor and Ricky?" I sorta shouted to them and the pointed to the drink table where Connor was talking to a brown haired girl (picture on the side)  who was significantly shorter than him and looked super pretty. Ricky was also talking to a girl who was like and inch shorter than him and she had light blonde hair, she was really pretty too.

"Getting there flirting on...." Sam said with his arm around Marcy and Connor ran over with is hand entwined with the girl.

"Hey guys this is Chloe, Chloe Marcy, Hal, Andrea, Kian, Jc and Sam" Connor said and she waved smiling

"Hi peeps" she said.

"Oh and that Ricky" Connor said pointing back to Ricky and she smiled

"Yeah, he's with my friend Tilly" she said and Connor gave a quizzical look.

"I am camping with her" she said like it was obvious and we let out and awkward laugh. Her and Connor walked away hand in hand dancing and they looked so cute.

*2 hours later*

I may of had about 3 beers so I was getting tipsy and I was sweating like mad. Me and Jc had been dancing all night non stop and I needed a rest. Just as I was about to sit down a huge circle was cleared in the middle of the floor and Chloe and Tilly I think that was her name entered.

"Put on Sail by AWOLNATION please?" They shouted and it started. They were amazing at dancing! They were perfectly in time and very flexible! I could see Connor and Ricky watching in awe. They likes girls who could dance.

They finished and everyone cheered. Somehow I think Jc pushed me and I ended up in the middle of the floor. I had this. I used to dance, It had been years but I could dance. I decided to dance to 'Timber - Ke$ha ft Pitbull' and the music started and I just went for it.

All I can remember after that was everyone walking home and Jc carrying my back. I remember Connor and Chloe going of and staying in her tent and Ricky and Tilly staying in the pod Connor and him share. I remember Jc laying me down on the bed and covering me in blankets and lying next to me drawing pictures with his finger on my arm. Him tracing the outlines of scars and it making me fall asleep.

- hey hey guys so here is an update :) Chloe and Tilly are my friends from school so I used them ;) you should read my friend Chloe's FanFic on O2l her username is 'phonesock' :D I have a French assessment tomorrow for a competition with my friends to go to the spy headquarters of England and we have to perform in front of a class....HELP! I also edited the front cover because I didn't like the old one too much! thanks for reading and voting! Commenting ideas is always appreciated

Livvy <3 -

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