Kesmet's fate//being Rewritten

Prolouge

I sat alone in the grassy plains of Constalation. I didn't have a family. No father, mother, or siblings. I was known as "unlucky rat" people stayed far away from me. A large ship came into view. "Probaly another food shipment." I thought. But it stopped where I was. I pointed to the landing pad, 16 miles east. But it shot a bright light down to where I was. I scrambled away, trying to escape. But, it pulled me in to quickly. Ravegers circled me, smiling evily.
"What happened to your right eye, rat?" My right eye was cloudy, and my left was a slit pupil. Before I could answer, someone yelled.
"One more stop! A blue man said.
"Who are you?" I breathed. My heart was pounding, almost out of my chest.
"I am Yondu, your new captain." We blasted forward, throwing me backwards. We arrived at a very odd planet. "Drop 'er her Kraglin." Yondu announced. The ship was droped into the atmosphere. We came to a jerking stop. Out the window I could see a boy, hands out in front of his face. He arrived in the ship, crying. He cried harder as he saw all the scary men circling him. I pushed through them all, shoving as hard as I could. I sat next to the boy. I gave him a reassuring smile. He gave a slight smile, and looked back down at the floor. I pulled him into a quick hug. He was surprised at first, but, hugged me back tightly. We took off, as he cried on my shoulder.
26 years later
"I'll be back in, like 20 minutes." He said holding my sholders. He brought me close, and kissed me on the forehead. I smiled, and hugged him tightly. He realeased the hug and continued out the top hatch. I looked out as he walked through the stong winds. I went down into my room, and layed on the queen matress. I shut my eyes and thought about Peter. He and I have been partners since he got his first ship. He was 10, and I was two months fom being 10. We learned to fly it together. Yondu taught Peter how to shoot his blasters, and me my pistols. I thought of the night Peter and I snuck out, and sat underneath the stars. He was fascinated with how many ther where. They sparkled in his eyes. He had beautiful eyes. I was jolted to the ceiling, hitting my head. "PETER!" I yelled. I made my way up to the control room to see four men. They had a giant gun pointed at the ship. Quickly Peter pulled away, and sent me flying again.
"Kesmet!" He yelled. I rubbed my aching head. He looked at the men, throwing things at the ship. Another jolt sent me up, knocking me unconscious. After that, it was all darkness. A haze of blurry images. Random pains, then no pains. I would flashback, seeing my dreary days as a child. I woke up to see Peter asleep, next to me. His arms holding me tight. I moved slightly, turning to see his face. "Peter?" I whispered, wishing to wake him softly. He breathed in, and opened his eyes.
"Kesmet!" He embraced me, and leaned his head on mine.
"Peter, how long have I been out?" He looked at me, and looked at the wall. "A day.."
"What!?" He layed me back down, and layed down with me.
"I was so worried about you." He said. I could hear him choking up, but trying to hide it.
"I am okay. Where are we?"
"On our way to knowhere." He swallowed the lump in his throat, and looked into my eyes.
"Peter? I-" His lips pressed on mine, stopping me mid-word. I shut my eyes, and kissed him back. His arms hgged me tightly. His hands began to travel through my short hair. I reached my hands up, almost reaching his light brown hair. The door opened, Gamora standing in the doorway.  "Hope I'm not interrupting anything." She said. Peter released his kiss, looking up. "Oh, uh.." He looked at me and gave a slight smile. "Uh, how close are we?" He asked, avoiding Gamora's question. He got up, and headed for the control room. I sat on the bed, stunned. He always was flirtatious,  but I never thought it would lead into anything. We arrived at knowhere. It was a scary loooking place. Peter saw me and hugged me close. "We are gonna be fine!" He said. That day was everything but fine. The orb peter stole was an infinity stone. It was unleashed, and blew up the collector's place. Drax called Ronan, and Quill and I were captured. Ronan got ahold of the orb, and planned to destroy Xandar. On Xandar, Peter's ship was destroyed, along with everything in it. We were all laying there. Not one knowing what to do. I could see Rocket working on a broken piece of machinery. Everyone looked at each other, whishing Rocket could work faster. Peter stood, slowly, but he stood. "Ooh child, things are gonna get eaiser. Ooh child things will get brighter. Listen to these words." He began swaying to the song. "What are you doing?"
"Dance off bro, you and me." He began dancing to the song.
"Oh Peter." I thought.
"What are you doing!?"
"I'm distracting ya, you little turd blossom." Rocket's gun fired, hitting the hammer. Peter jumped reaching out to grab it.
"Peter, NO!" I yelled. He was on he ground, yelling out in pain. I worried for his life, and everyone else's.  He quickly stood. I covered my head, debree flying everywhere. I stood, seeing him in pain. "PETER! TAKE MY HAND!" I yelled. He turned his head slowly. He grabbed my hand, and the energy surged through me. Quickly Gamora, Drax, and Rocket joined in.
"But you are mortal! How?"
"You said it yourself, we're the guardians of the galaxy." Peter opened his hand, sending purple power surges towards Ronan. He exploded into nothing. Gamora put the stone in the orb. I fell to the ground, my legs cramping. Peter turned, helping me to my feet. He looked at me, his face burnt and bleeding. His hair was a matted mess, yet he still rocked it.
"Peter, I-" I was cut of by Yondu, walking slowly towards us.
"Hand over the orb, boy." He looked at me, then back at Yondu.
"Peter, you can't." Peter held the orb in his hand, staring at it for a while. He quickly handed to him, looking at me. He winked, and turned back to Yondu.
"Don't open it. You've seen what it does to people." He answered. Yondu pointed to Peter, laughing as he walked away.
"He is gonna be so pissed when he finds out." Peter chuckled. I laughed a little, and rubbed my aching body. He reached out to touch me, but retreated knowing it would hurt me. A little while after everything,  we went to Nova Corps.
"I'm not full terron?" Peter questioned. He was extremely confused, glancing at me, and back at the photo. I turned away, looking around the building. People where staring at me, watching my every move. My people where war hungry people, making me a slight target. I stared down at my gloved hands. I didn't look "normal" I was a rare type of person. I had almost scale like skin. My "scales" where large, and white. The space in between was black. My left eye was like a snake, and my right eye was clouded, and mis colored. I had short white hair.
"If you would please follow Deniran Day, he will be showing you the way out. We where led to the deck, and showed a new ship. I could still feel the other's eyes on me.
"Thank you." Peter said. I was staring at the ground, rubbing my arm. We entered the ship, and I stayed by Peter's side.
"K, can you give me a minute?" He asked, I nodded, and awkwardly walked away. I walked to the lower deck, seeing my old room, just like new. I walked in, sitting on an extremely soft matress. I layed down, letting the soft cushion hug my still aching body. My door opened, Peter standing against the wall music played in the background. He held out his hand.
"May I have this dance?" He smirked. I got up wincing at the pain. He walked over to me, hugging me lightly.
"I love you Kesmet." He whispered. Before I could say anything, he kissed me, holding me closer. I wrapped my arms around him tightly.
"I love you, Peter Jason Quill." I said.

I am sorry about the prolouge. It isn't my best work, so don't let ths discourage you. This is a summary, so it doesn't have as much detail as the rest of the story will have.
Thank you for reading, I will be updating quite a lot.