CRIT!CAL

Chapter 9

Our hotel

We have got to the hotel and got our rooms and they're awesome, big and very fancy, we have a huge TV and a very strong WiFi signal. We have another TV in front of the bed which is even bigger than the last! This room was very nice and better from the others because we're the club leaders. It was very late when we got there, so we watched some The Unit before we went to bed.

I felt today would be a great day, it's the last day until the band, I'M SO EXCITED! Since we are in a club band we can go anywhere we want in the hotel and the class band has to go where there teacher goes, so the first thing we do is go to the restaurant, we have a 30% VIP discount from the club band, and we were there for an hour.

After, we waited a bit then went to the pool. Me and Takano went down the 1st slide together and it was SO FAST! THERE WAS A FLIPPING LOOPTY LOOP IN IT! When we got to the bottom we went flying out of it. Then we went on the second one, it was pretty much just your average swirly water slide it was fast but we just kind of plopped out of the end of it.

The third one had 5 FRICKIN LOOPTY LOOPS! The forth one went through the wall and went outside, the outside tubes were made of really thick glass, but the glass part was kind of nerve racking. The 5th on the MOST TERRIFYING OF THEM ALL,right at the beginning there was a small loopty loop then it when OUTSIDE AND DID 5 LOOPTY LOOPS! Then we flew across the room!

After that we went in the hot tub for a bit then the group went to the VIP restaurant which you can only access with the club VIP where we had a big chicken dinner

"Hey aren't you full?", I ask Kouharu. He looked stuffed didn't stop. Sometimes I question our friendship. I look over to Takano he looked back at me and smiled I had turned a bright red. We went back to our room a little later and I asked him;

"Do you want to do it?"

"What kind of question is that, of course, I was thinking you can suck it?"

"Sure, after, can I put it in you?"

"Sure."

So we laid down on hotel bed and he pulled down his pants and I put his penis in my mouth, it didn't taste the best so we did that for like 3 minutes, then I put it in his butt for like 10 minutes in and out, it felt so good he seemed to like it too.

Then we went to the candy store and went swimming again after that. We finally had supper, we went to that VIP place again and had a giant pizza, and once again, Takano stuffed his face again then we all went to bed excited for the performance.

This was my friends doing and again, thanks for the support.

THE BAND

Today is the day of the performance, we are really excited, if we win we get a ticket to Hawaii..

A/N OOOOh two updates one day. there was the part that said put it in for 10 minutes and it was very great description ( I say sarcasticaly)