The little things (A Hayes Grier fanfiction)

Introduction

The moving men put the last two boxes in the truck and shut it closed. I turned to look at my best friend, Michelle. "Well, i guess this is goodbye." Michelle said sadly. My dad had gotten a better job in North Carolina so me and my family were moving there. I was really scared because i've never moved before, and I really didn't want too either. I hugged her tightly "I'm going to miss you so much." I cried into her shoulder. "I'll miss you too. Always text me and come and visit, okay?" she told me. "McKenna come on!" my older sister yelled. "I love you loser. Talk to you later." I told Michelle and hugged her one last time before getting in the car. We drove out of now our old house and left all the memories behind. I looked back. "Good bye Georgia." I whispered quietley.

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