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Back to story......
Someone came nd back hugged Preeta.
It was revealed to be Prithvi. After there marriage Prithvi nd Sherlyn left for the bachlors party. Sherlyn went towards luthra family nd Prithvi was searching his preetaji...(Sry i know Preeta is one only her bajarbattu's babydoll)
Prithvi saw Preeta in corridor nd was mesmorised seeing her. He went towards her nd hugged her from back. At that time Karan came in corridor in search of Preeta nd saw this. He was about to go nd punch that daadi wala bakra for touching his babydoll but stopped seeing them nd hid behind curtains.
Preeta pushed him nd shockingly saw Prithvi
Prithvi: Aap bahot hot nd sexy (Preeta started feeling more uncomfortable listening this) lag rahe ho. Aap iss dress mai kamal lag rahe ho. (Madly) Mujhe pata hai ki aap sirf mere liye itn taayar hue ho aur isliye aap itne aache lag rahe ho.
He started leaning towards her.... Preeta was trying to stop him but he was not listening. Karan saw this nd fist his hand in anger nd was moving towards them but stopped listening to a thad........... 👋👋👋👋👋Sound
Preeta slapped Prithvi very hardly that he falled on ground near her feet. Karan saw this nd again stopped there.
Preeta: (Angrily) Aap samajhte kya ho aapne aap ko... Mai aapse kuch nhi kehti kyuki mai aapni maa ki pasand ko disrespect nhi kr sakti....pr aaj toh aapne haaad hi kr di.. Aap mujhe jabardashti kiss karne ki koshish kr rahe the.. Jab bhi aap mere pass atte the mujhe uncomfortable feel hota hai pr ye bat aapne kabhi samjhi hi nhi aur aap har vakt mujhe uncomfortable feel karate rahe... Maine kabhi aapse kuch nhi kaha kyuki aap maa ki pasand ho aur hamari shaadi hone wali hai isliye mai chup rahi.... Pr aaj jo aapne kiya usse mujhe itna toh pata chal gaya ki aapko mere feelings ki koi respect hi nahi hai...
Prithvi: Aap yeh kaisi baate kr rahi hai mujhse... Aap mujhse uncomfortable hai aur jab aap uss gilli danda player ke sath hoti hai uski bahon mai tab aapko uncomfortable feel nhi hota..... Tab aapko pata nhi tha ki aapki shaadi mujhse ho rahi hi uss gilli danda player se nhi....
Listening Karan's name from his mouth Preeta's anger was at peak....
Preeta(angrily): Pehli baat wo koi gilli danda player nhi the star cricketer THE KARAN LUTHRA hai(Karan widely smiled listening this). Wo aaj jaha bhi hai aapni mehnat se hai toh aapko koi hak nhi banta uspe koi bhi comment karne ka.Aur aap kya Karan ke character pr ungli utha rahe hai. Wo famous hai,aamir hai, popular hai isliye ladkiyan usske peche ghumti rehti hai. Pr wo aapni limit bohat aache se janta hai.. Jab Karan arrest hua tha tab aapne usse casanova aur play boy kaha tha na... Pr wo har ladki ki respect karta hai aur uss limit ko banaye rakhta hai..... Wo flirt jarur hai pr wo ladkiyon ke emotions ko aapki tarah disrespect nhi karta. Jo insaan aapni hone wali bawi ko safe aur comfortable feel nhi kara sakta usse kya baat karne......(she starts to leave but turns back nd says) Aur hai aur ek baat mai chahu toh aabhi ke aabhi ye rishta tod sakti hu pr mai aapni maa ko dukhi nhi dekh sakti isliye aapko aur ek mauka de rahi hu.... Wapas kabhi mere samne mere karan ke upar ungli uthane ki koshish mat karna( Karan widely smiled hearing mera Karan nd was very proud abt his babydoll for taking hr stand) . Agar dobara aapne aaisa waisa karne ke bare mi socha bhi na toh jo aaj maine aapko thappad mara hai na wo agli baar saari duniya ke saamne marugi... Mere liye meri self respect sabse jyada jaruri hai badme saare rishte naate.....
Preeta walked away from there.... Prithvi was very shocked with Preeta's reaction but he left without saying anything cuz he was afraid that she might break the marriage. Preeta was very upset with all happenings around her. She was angry on Prithvi but also helpless as she couldn't back out from this marriage. Tears were there in her eyes remembering when Prithvi was trying to forcefully kiss her. She went in gust room nd cried out........ Karan knew that his babydoll needs him now nd he went behind hr to guest room......
Actually i wrote this part cuz mujhe wo kamzor aur bechari preeta pasand nhi. Nd I wanted Karan to know that she is doing all this for hr mother nd also that she cares a lot abt hr bajarbattu......
There would 1 more emotional part nd then next parts will be full of fun nd masti....
Precap: Preeta's emotional breakdown...... Karan consoles her..... Nd a new plan of Preeran for Prithvi........
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