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Review: Honestly, you're doing everything well here. Writing never feels choppy and the actions just flow off the page and into my head. A very creative twist to the classic werewolf story and the perfect balance between paranormal and modern realistic fiction. The plotline where he stays at Ally's house as a dog is hilarious and you had me laughing throughout the entire chapter. Stakes are just high enough to keep us on the edge, and you set the scene of mystery beautifully, leaves all of us yearning for more. Vocabulary and grammar, although it seems like something small, greatly contributed to my enjoyment as I spotted no noticeable mistakes. However, I wish we had gotten more background on how Vincent's search for magic/moon sickness led him to Ally! Does her grandmother have a reputation as a witch? The plotline with Ally's mother and ex-boyfriend felt a bit unexpected but I'm sure you will tie it all together. I can't wait to read more! I love your book. You've got a reader forever.
Review: Writing flows very well - you have the ability to fast forward through time and get to the important bits without it being abrupt. Grammar and vocab are perfect. Your plot is very interesting and the relationship between your main characters is very engaging and leaves the reader wanting to find out more. Overall, I think you have the amazing ability to build strong, lovable characters and develop deep relationships between them. However, the dialogue and your cover are the main areas you need to work on. Your cover is pretty average and it really takes away from your awesome book. The dialogue can come off as a bit stiff and stilted as well. Although you make it work, the plot of living with your mate's pack is a little cliché. I also wish we could have learned more about the relationship between humans and changelings though - I loved the moment in the taxi between the driver and Rajini!
