There are certain things you want to avoid in a lemon story.
1-Repeating words
-Using the same words over and over can be confusing and annoying. So if you can't think of another word. Just look it up on google.
2-Too much Detail
-Detail is good but you wanna have enough but not too much. Moderation is the key to every door.
3-Making Things Too Fast
-Don't make it so they're moving really fast. Add some feelings. A little bit of care and consideration. As pauses at certain parts. You wanna make it long but not too long.
4-Ending It Too Soon
-I realize that after the sex it's kinda hard to come up with a conversation. But it doesn't have to be too long. Maybe one of them is sleep and the other is telling them 'sweet Dreams' or 'that was good'. A funny idea would be that they were arguing about something a few days before, like who left out the cereal, and then the one who did it admits to it. Just have fun.
(More stuff, but I can't think of it right now. I'll figure it out later and add more)
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How to Write Lemon
RandomThis awesome book will show any upcoming writer how to write a lemon. Now I realize that I myself don't write lemon, but that's for other reasons. Anyways!!! Please enjoy this book.
