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I'm an overactive writer who is in the process of sending my manuscript to publishers.

I'm looking for feedback on my characters and stories, so I came here to see what would happen!

There have been too many times where I've given up on spelling a word and just used another one instead.
  • Wherever words go when you erase them.
  • JoinedApril 13, 2015


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ArieShadowfall ArieShadowfall Mar 24, 2017 07:53PM
I'm going to apologize ahead of time for any typos in chapter 31. I was working on it on the back of a hot, bumpy bus, and I'm sure you can all guess how well that went. I did my best to work them al...
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