Aroha_xox

Just letting ya’ll know....I posted a sex scene since so many of you requested....ya nasties lol! Anyway it’s up there in Chapter 49.

Patricia429583

When are you going to write again
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Aroha_xox

49
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Aroha_xox

Sorry totally forgot to say what book LOL! It’s in ZEUS CHAPTER 9
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Sweet4grease

I just finished Xander and would like to know what happens with the rest of them. but am hesitant. It seems you have trouble following time-lines ie: she was one month into an Alpha's 6 month pregnsncy when he "died". When he reappeared to explain his disappearance and kill the bad guy she's in labor. But according to your story everyone keeps saying he's been gone for 9 months... This is just an example of the many continuity issues in the story.  It was hard to read. I'm going to try the next in the series and see if it gets any better because the plot was actually really good.... no promises that I'll finish it!

Sweet4grease

@Sweet4grease Update: I have now read the series and noticed your work has improved. Avoiding mentioning time frames definitely fixes the problem of getting it way off and distracting the reader. The story lines flow so much better that way.
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dallas1213

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