CHASEBOII69

D11abc

@CHASEBOII69 bro they on bars now
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CHASEBOII69

One of the more common problems that I'm facing as a writer is that, while I can make decently good First Chapters, the second chapter is always the part where I screw up. And if you screw that up, you've effectively derailed the whole story.
          
          This is the problem that I'm facing with The Sky Is Pink. I've let myself down with that second chapter again. Although, and I rarely say this about my stories, I'm fairly satisfied with how Chapter 3 turned out.
          
          It's just that, if I learn how to improve the second chapters, I'll probably be able to make the story as good as I wanted it to be. That's just something I'm gonna have to learn to do in the future.
          
          Oh well, guess I'm still incompetent as a writer then eh?

Wolffe123

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@CHASEBOII69 you have summed up my problem so well. It all seems so promising in planning and fist little bit, then I fuck it up and the plot and any interest disintegrates
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TheOLPHA

@CHASEBOII69 i get this a lot tbh
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duckmakeslovetome

@CHASEBOII69 i liked the 2nd chapter. it was cute af
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CHASEBOII69

Oh well. I think im gonna discontinue dandelions (if you know, you know)
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          But hey
          Its not all that bad
          Because ill be continuing The Sky Is Pink
          Probably

CHASEBOII69

@TSIEwastaken well, not really. Itll just be a while before i update it. Same goes for my other stuff.
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TSIEwastaken

@CHASEBOII69 what about Adventure Bay High? Is that discontinued?
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