Eloixxxe

If you're a new reader, I recommend you to read in sequence (more like the latest bec it is less cringeyyy loll)
          	Our Fallout: A second chance (stand-alone, on hold but you won't regret reading it)
          	He's my girl (stand-alone, felt like a rush ending still on top) 
          	
          	
          	A dangerous game called love (Alyssa Mendoza, best well written DALAS series)
          	Chasing life, dreams and you (Dane Johnson, just mid)
          	Right with you (Selena Ocampo, slow burn and no shocking plot twist just pure love)
          	Forbidden love (Axein Sandoval & Lexi Torres: Warning this is my first story so expect A LOT of cringe scenes)
          	
          	Memories Series
          	Faded Memories (insane plot)
          	In her loving memories (the intense push and pull)
          	Remembering her (unnecessary and sad ending)
          	
          	okay, so this is like my rate HAHAHAHA

Eloixxxe

@KendallJ000 Aww. Omggg. Thank youuu! 
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KendallJ000

@Eloixxxe It doesn't seem rushed to me author. But if you feel that way I wouldn't mind reading a new version. Really worth rereading ang story na to bumabalik ako palagi. 
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Eloixxxe

@KendallJ000 yass one of my TOPPPP! but i just felt like the ending was a bit rushed?? idk pero sana medjjj binagalan ko yung habulan nila Maxi, Addi at Sae hehe
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ccmrsnsj

author, ano ang masasabi mo sa pagpasa ni misyel nang korona?? balance ba?? HAHAHAHAHAHAAAHAHH LTTTTT SHUTAAAAAA ANG CUUTIEEE MO MISYELL !! SARAP MONG IBULSA ! (may sama ng loob pa rin sa muphmngmnt kasi hindi ininv si tonyang my baby :(( )

Eloixxxe

@ccmrsnsj ayyy ang sadd naman baka di na rin i-invite si Michelle ng MUT niyan! HAHAHAHAH wala na sa MUPH kasi. :(((
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ccmrsnsj

akala ko rin, e may nag post sa twitter na nakakausap si tonyang, dapat daw is 21 balik niya sa thai pero 20 siya bumalik para makahabol kaso wala raw 
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Eloixxxe

@ccmrsnsj ang cute niyaaaaaa HAHAHAHAHA Legit ba? Akala ko may ibang sched lang si Ann kaya hindi nakapunta?
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Eloixxxe

If you're a new reader, I recommend you to read in sequence (more like the latest bec it is less cringeyyy loll)
          Our Fallout: A second chance (stand-alone, on hold but you won't regret reading it)
          He's my girl (stand-alone, felt like a rush ending still on top) 
          
          
          A dangerous game called love (Alyssa Mendoza, best well written DALAS series)
          Chasing life, dreams and you (Dane Johnson, just mid)
          Right with you (Selena Ocampo, slow burn and no shocking plot twist just pure love)
          Forbidden love (Axein Sandoval & Lexi Torres: Warning this is my first story so expect A LOT of cringe scenes)
          
          Memories Series
          Faded Memories (insane plot)
          In her loving memories (the intense push and pull)
          Remembering her (unnecessary and sad ending)
          
          okay, so this is like my rate HAHAHAHA

Eloixxxe

@KendallJ000 Aww. Omggg. Thank youuu! 
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KendallJ000

@Eloixxxe It doesn't seem rushed to me author. But if you feel that way I wouldn't mind reading a new version. Really worth rereading ang story na to bumabalik ako palagi. 
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Eloixxxe

@KendallJ000 yass one of my TOPPPP! but i just felt like the ending was a bit rushed?? idk pero sana medjjj binagalan ko yung habulan nila Maxi, Addi at Sae hehe
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Eloixxxe

I always thought I was the type of person where If I like someone... I'd definitely confess my feelings but no, I realized that there are things to consider. Not her answer but on my part. 

Eloixxxe

Maybe I liked how you gave your attention to me. I liked how you cared for me. I like your thoughts... your sarcasm. I liked your typings anyway lolll but maybe it was out of boredom. I liked the idea of you in my head. I can't see myself entering in a relationship with you because you're far and we've never met in person. I felt like my feelings were made out of pure boredom and imagination. That's why, I wasn't able to confess my feelings but I did... really liked you. A lot. I like how you made me do a lot of crazy things. I like waiting for my notification to pop just to see your name. I liked waiting for you to be online and go offline again, even though you won't chat me. I still liked seeing that green circle near your profile picture. I liked waiting for you for hours. I smile like a stupid idiot even though you left me on read— at least I got the chance to talk to you. I just like you so much. I don't know if this is friendship or romantic feelings but my whole month of February and March, I was only thinking about you.
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Eloixxxe

It was my first time receiving those kinds of comments. You know, I accept constructive criticism, but not mean comments. I strive for more improvements because I know my work isn't perfect. I don't have any background in writing or any art of making stories, plus I am not talented. I'm not even a good storyteller in person. I type what I think. I'm just an amateur wannabe writer but I hope you know that I put a lot of effort into every word you read in that story, just for you to call it lame and shits. It's just funny and sad how other people carelessly leave mean comments as if we didn't pour our everything from making a conversation to a small detail scenario until it becomes a whole story. This is why some people are so afraid of posting their work. If you don't like my story then say it rather than calling it lame. If you don't like my story feel free to exit it, I'm not forcing you to read it. Just a simple respect to all writers wanting to publish their own work. Just a little kindness is appreciated. Thank you.

Eloixxxe

@_sshheenngg Thank you for all the heart warming words. Can't express how grateful I am. Grabeeee yes, may tiktok ako pero closed na. Hahaha. But you can still search for it @ athenxhaylw yung username. ❤️
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_sshheenngg

@Eloixxxe may tiktok po kayo? Para po matag ko kayo gagawa po ako video to recommend your stories po
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_sshheenngg

@Eloixxxe May ganyan talaga. Ako nakatanggap din ako ng mga negative comment. Imagine after 11yrs ngayon lang ako naglakas loob na ipublish ang mga stories na nagawa ko then ganun lang pala mapapala ko kahit pa may paalala ung bawat chapter na wag na basahin kung ayaw sa story pero ganun parin puro negative comment ang nababasa ko. Ayoko na sana ituloy di ko na sana ipapublish at magstay na lang sa pageedit sa tiktok pero dahil sa marami ang sumusouporta sakin at dahil sa author na sina gayreen, moshhihart, alittlesaucy, yuiyuuu-chu, legitnocapfrfr na naappreciate yung gawa ko pinagpatuloy ko ang pagsusulat. And ngayon marami na nakasupport sakin. 
            
            FromNOPE: Hey Hey, go with your passion, may maeencounter ka talaga na critic's, masakit siya sa part mo syempre, but still go kung saan ka masaya, tandaan mo soon marami na kami/sila na magbabasa ng story mo, typical here, naicocompare ang story sa mga great author's na, but alam naman natin na once in a may critic's din sila, but still pinagpatuloy nila, note hindi araw araw sugar-coated word matatanggap mo.
            
            
            From LunA:Don't stop writing just because of those kinds of people. If it is your passion, then go for it. Hindi talaga maiiwasan ang ganyang klaseng mga tao.
            
            From sim1:Make it your motivation but don't say sorry, for they don't pay to read your story.
            
            
            
            Share ko po yung mga sinabi ng mga readers ko. Hopefully po pagpatuloy mo po yan❤️
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