EvangelineCaldwell

So you have read everything I have written. I am trying to out out a new chapter a week. Any input after reading the whole thing? Like flow-wise? Or structurally? 

MeyanaMemeLove

@EvangelineCaldwell Sometimes we are our own worst critiques, but you are a good writer you should listen to yourself..It will cause you to push you to your furthest potential as an author. You are helping people by writing this.
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EvangelineCaldwell

I think I started to get a little lazy in some parts and need to give some more details. Build the full picture better. But thank you very much. I like the sporadic chapters. It seems different and not so straightforward. Because nothing about this was straightforward. 
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MeyanaMemeLove

@EvangelineCaldwell I like what you have done with it thus far, the way you have structured it has caused the element of wanting to know what happens next and really to identify with the character.
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EvangelineCaldwell

Wow! Thank you for starting to read my book. And all of your votes. It means so much to me. Leave me any and all feedback. This is my first and roughest draft :) 

MeyanaMemeLove

@EvangelineCaldwell Writing a book is a wonderful way to break free. I felt very alone, and still do sometimes. I think those experiences take part in who we are forever, they cannot be taken back or removed. You are a Strong, Blessed Woman. Conquering#
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EvangelineCaldwell

Thank you. Thank you for that wonderful comment. I'm glad it was what you needed. I am so sorry something similar happened to you. It's insane that so many women have suffered something similar and NO ONE talks about it. I felt absolutely and terrifyingly alone. 
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MeyanaMemeLove

@EvangelineCaldwell You are doing an amazing thing that i have never had the courage to do. You have no idea, i needed to read this...
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