Rom247

Hi readers! I realise Salt is moving into some complicated story and I’ve had a couple of comments that readers weren’t entirely sure what had happened between chapters 41-44. Please let me know if it’s a issue and I will look at it and try to edit so that it’s clearer. 
          	Definitely, I am pushing myself and finding my limitations with this story, so please bear with it! 
          	Also, who finds it tricky to be objective when you have written and reread and rewritten? I do! Because I know what’s happening, so sometimes it’s difficult to tell if the writing is clear (or even legible) 

Rom247

Hi! Thanks. And thanks for following and reading my stories. You are so right about following your line of thought. That’s the same for me too. 
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Akita_Ninjago

@Rom247 
          	  I think you are doing great, I love all your books, and it is just a matter to follow your line of thought, at least it is for me. Continue, it is great!
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Rom247

Hi readers! I realise Salt is moving into some complicated story and I’ve had a couple of comments that readers weren’t entirely sure what had happened between chapters 41-44. Please let me know if it’s a issue and I will look at it and try to edit so that it’s clearer. 
          Definitely, I am pushing myself and finding my limitations with this story, so please bear with it! 
          Also, who finds it tricky to be objective when you have written and reread and rewritten? I do! Because I know what’s happening, so sometimes it’s difficult to tell if the writing is clear (or even legible) 

Rom247

Hi! Thanks. And thanks for following and reading my stories. You are so right about following your line of thought. That’s the same for me too. 
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Akita_Ninjago

@Rom247 
            I think you are doing great, I love all your books, and it is just a matter to follow your line of thought, at least it is for me. Continue, it is great!
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MsBeliever05

“Hey little fighter, soon things will be brighter. Don’t forget that you’re human. It’s okay to have a melt down, just don’t unpack and live there. Cry it out, then refocus on where you are headed. And soon, when all is well, you’re going to look back on this period of life be glad that you never gave up.” 
          
          Have a great week! :)
          Stay safe, 
          Stay strong,
          Stay alive fren ||-//
          
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WriterinFandomWorld

Hey fam. :)

WriterinFandomWorld

@Rom247 Thxs. Rereading my old stuff always makes me cringe bc theres no plot XD. Im taking a more dramatic change with the plot and limiting the amount of characters I use. 
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Rom247

@WriterinFandomWorld Always good to revisit old work. Rereading older work, my writing is clunky. No time to change it though. Have fun with the tree... won't be doing ours till closer to Xmas.
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WriterinFandomWorld

@WriterinFandomWorld Btw, its for my new fic, a complete rewrite of my old ninjago fic. This one'll be titled: The Girl Born From Ink, Iron, and Gold. Hopefully
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Rom247

Hello readers!
          I just wanted to check in and let you all know how much I appreciate you reading my fictions. They are flights of  fancy that challenge me every week, which can be insanely fulfilling while at the same time making me question my reasoning and sanity! 
          I’ve recently started a full time job and it is getting increasingly difficult to maintain the strict weekly update deadline, that I enforce on myself. 
          I want this story to be as good as it can be and it’s at a tricky stage where a lot of things are about to kick off. I can’t rush this one or I may as well just chuck in the bin. 
          So with that in mind I am having a short break to work on the plot, storyline and structure (I have no idea what I’m talking about) to makeut a good read for you (Rom says hopefully). 
          Without further ado. Adieu. 
          
          Back soon. 
          
          Rom. 

Rom247

@star10199 Hi thanks for asking the question. I'm working from triggers in the TV show, that the FSM created Ninjago. As such he would have to create the people within in. I am imagining that some of these were given elemental powers but are essentially still 'human'. There has been no reference (that I know) that Wu and Garmadon have a mother, so I am assuming that they too were created. I think this idea of creation sits well with the Lego concept. I wanted there to be an obvious difference between the 'human' elementals and the Sons of the FSM, as they have been referenced to be hundreds of years old, but the elementals have a 'human' lifespan. So I added my idea that Ninjago was designed to be ruled by a Caste system amongst the elementals, power handed down generation by generation with the sons of the FSM created to enable this and ensure its stability. But this was thrown off by one become Evil and Ninjago has had to develop in a more organic way.
          I hope that answers your question and explains my thinking. Its a very interesting concept and great that the programme doesn't spell everything out as law, as we would have nothing to play with!
          Personally I like that everything can be traced back to a master builder which is pure Lego.
          Best, Rom.