12ashu34
Hey! I read your story A loan of five rupees in 2018 I guess and I loved it. From then I looked forward to reading Xavier's and Alisha's story. When I got notification that you are back after so many years I was delighted but knowing Xavier and Subhadra have separated was heartbreaking, as with only a few glimpses of their marriage I have loved them. I understand that what she has done is very difficult cause leaving him had caused her so much pain but she did so that Xav would not settle for less. I don't know but I always feel that what she did was incomparable but I am just not able to digest that her mention or appearance hurts Xav, he is not able to understand her sacrifice. Also I don't know, I feel Xavier and Subhadra should have been together at last; I don't know but reading Xavier's story hurt me I am not able to love Krithika, I just feel Subhadra deserves better at least for her sacrifices she does not deserve to be seen as a villain in Xav's eyes. Also I feel in this whole drama Shubhadra has endured more pain than anyone else, I just hope if you could write some alternate story for Xav and Subhadra and if not then at least Subhadra's story even short story would do, I just want to see her happy ending.
Suganthii
@12ashu34 I would try to do from the next drafting chapters... I hope you are asking for Jagdish-Nishi story, Xavier's story is about engineering theorem's mostly.. right now I am drafting 71st chapter ig, I'll surely try to include meaning. Thanks for the suggestions
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12ashu34
I understand that they are not villains to each other it's just them not being together hurts :( But I understand that two people do not always end up together. Yeah, Satya's story is going to be painful too and I would patiently wait for Subhadra's even if it takes years. Thank you for replying, it means a lot as Subhadra was there in my mind for a very long time. Also if you could add the meaning of your chapter titles at the end...I don't get it on the net every time.
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Suganthii
@12ashu34 also talking about Subhadra's story, I haven't decided yet about writing her story as I am able to decipher her emotions to well and they make me cry. And it's tough for me to focus on writing when I cry and have migraine lol. May be coming years I might think about it but right now I am not ready to write about her. Already I am carrying enough pain while thinking about Satya's story, I don't want one more female lead's pain.
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