Your a good writer, an individual who can keep the readers interested in a book, and that's nice. So far I have read only one of your novel "Boyfriend shirt" and am not impressed. Your writing is good and really constructive but your storyline is childish and predictable. in my opinion it would be nice if you can channel your storyline to other interesting plots.
I hardly give readers a feedback, but your effort in the book needed my own personal and sincere review.