cAPTAINsOREN

Good Evening to those following me. I wanted to let you guys know that as of tonight, I have finished my last big self edit of the entire story and published the epilogue I mentioned in my last few posts. Broken Wings is complete here on Wattpad! I am likely going to commission a new cover at some point in the next few months, but there are no further updates or additions to the story planned. 
          	
          	I want to thank the people who followed me for giving me more motivation than you can know to keep coming back to this story and get it done. Just knowing there were a few people who liked what I was writing and were waiting to see more has been more encouraging than I can put into words. I hope you guys and girls enjoy one last dive into Broken Wings. 
          	
          	Adrian's and Anea's story doesn't end on the last page, but going any further will have to wait until I'm ready to start publishing chapters for book 2 of this series, which I am calling Skyward Bound. I have another move coming up this summer, so I don't think I'll be spending a huge amount of time on writing. But stay tuned. I will be back.
          	
          	Until then, thank you all again!

cAPTAINsOREN

Good Evening to those following me. I wanted to let you guys know that as of tonight, I have finished my last big self edit of the entire story and published the epilogue I mentioned in my last few posts. Broken Wings is complete here on Wattpad! I am likely going to commission a new cover at some point in the next few months, but there are no further updates or additions to the story planned. 
          
          I want to thank the people who followed me for giving me more motivation than you can know to keep coming back to this story and get it done. Just knowing there were a few people who liked what I was writing and were waiting to see more has been more encouraging than I can put into words. I hope you guys and girls enjoy one last dive into Broken Wings. 
          
          Adrian's and Anea's story doesn't end on the last page, but going any further will have to wait until I'm ready to start publishing chapters for book 2 of this series, which I am calling Skyward Bound. I have another move coming up this summer, so I don't think I'll be spending a huge amount of time on writing. But stay tuned. I will be back.
          
          Until then, thank you all again!

cAPTAINsOREN

To anyone watching for notifications from me, what I just published isn't really new content-wise. It's just some formatting I've been meaning to add to the story's structure for a while. I have completed my editing of Chapters 1-10 and am almost done with Chapter 11. I hope to my last edit of this story by the end of March, and I seem to be on pace to do that. When that's done and the epilogue goes up, I will consider Broken Wings to be 100% complete.

cAPTAINsOREN

*hope to complete my last edit*
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cAPTAINsOREN

Good Evening. I know I have been very inactive here over the last few years. My last post explained my situation and the main reasons for going dark. It took much longer than I hoped, but I have completed the epilogue and it will be uploaded soon. But first, as a conclusion to this years long effort, I will be going through the entire story with a fine-toothed comb and bringing the writing up to my current standards. This effort is just editing, and I'm hopeful it will be done in the next few weeks. I have already completed my edit of the first chapter, and I will upload the epilogue when I've completed work on the rest of the story. Thank you for your patience and your interest in Broken Wings.

cAPTAINsOREN

After much too long a wait, Chapter 22, Beginnings, is complete and uploaded. I am sorry it took such a long time for me to get this chapter finished. A lot of different things conspired to make it a serious challenge to write. As I mentioned with my last upload, I moved in the middle of Feb 2020, right at the start of the Covid 19 pandemic. My family and I all made it through without anyone getting seriously ill during the worst of the outbreak, but the tension and anxiety made it difficult to write at all. My story also didn't feel as escapist as it used to, with the disruptions to society seeming to jump out at me from the words I'd written. That said, I did keep trying. And when I was able to write, I discovered that writing the ending of this story would have been much more difficult than any previous chapter, even if the move and the pandemic hadn't happened to compound the difficulties.
          
          Again, I am sorry this story has languished without updates for so long, but I never forgot about it. For any of my watchers who still remember Broken Wings and are excited to see how the story ends, you have my sincere appreciation. I say this is the end of the story, but there is one more thing I plan to publish. I'm working on an epilogue to expound on a few threads that are left open at the end of this chapter. I won't make any promises about when that will be complete and ready to upload, but I'm already making significant progress on it, so I'm cautiously optimistic that it will be up by the end of this year. 
          
          Input and constructive criticism/feedback are welcome as always.

cAPTAINsOREN

Chapter 21, Flight of Icarus, is finished and uploaded. I hope you all find it well worth the wait. I would like to promise the next chapter will be done sooner, but I'm moving at the end of the month, so I'm going to have to be focused on everything involved with that for a bit. Still, I'll be continuing to work on this story whenever I can, and I'm super excited for this next chapter! In the meantime, I hope you all enjoy this one!
          
          Input and constructive criticism/ feedback are welcome as always.

mackandelius

@cAPTAINsOREN take your time with the chapters and good luck moving.
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cAPTAINsOREN

Hey! Got this one done a lot faster, didn't I? Chapter 20, Into the Breach is up now. Hoping I can keep this pace up for a while, and of course, that you all enjoy the latest chapter!
          
          Input and constructive criticism/feedback are welcome as always.

cAPTAINsOREN

Another three months, finally another chapter done. This is what I get for telling myself the chapter I'm working on will be a short one. From now on, I'm just going to accept that this story clearly has a mind of its own, and its going to be exactly as long as it wants (For this draft, anyway). Work schedule is looking a bit lighter for the next few months, so *fingers crossed* maybe I'll be able to spend more time writing and get the next chapter up sooner. Here's hoping. Anyway, I hope you all enjoy chapter 19 of Broken Wings!
          
          Input and constructive criticism/feedback are welcome as always.

cAPTAINsOREN

@cAPTAINsOREN Yeah, I was looking at your comments, and there's some things to fix. I was pretty impatient to hit that publish button and probably wasn't as careful with my editing as usual. Glad your still enjoying the story and thanks for bringing those errors to my attention 
            
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mackandelius

@cAPTAINsOREN Though there is a part of me that would like more consistently uploaded chapters, it feels far better to actually have a sizable amount of content to read.
            
            And the only part of chapter 19  that should be looked at again is the early gryphon section, it's got a few spelling mistakes, if my english hasn't failed me.
            Other than that this was just another great chapter.
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cAPTAINsOREN

Hey! I live everybody!  Finally finished chapter 18. This was a tough one, and between work and family, I had a lot of other stuff going on these past few months. Rest assured, if you're interested in Broken Wings, I am going to finish it, even if it sometimes takes a long time between posts. I love this story and think about it every single day, even if I don't have the time to actually write anything. It won't let me forget about it. Well enough about me. Again, chapter 18 is up and I hope you all enjoy it! 
          
          Input and constructive criticism/feedback are welcome as always.

cAPTAINsOREN

Hey guys. Got the next part up. Question: Anyone know how to get strikethrough text in a story on Wattpad? I just spent over an hour trying to make it work, and no matter what I tried, none of the HTML formatting tags made any changes in the preview. Do I need to just publish with the tags, or am I missing something equally simple? Anyway, I'm happy with this chapter and I'm not going to wait to publish while I troubleshoot this formatting issue. Just know any text in {brackets} is meant to have strikethrough for now.
          
          Input and constructive criticism/feedback are welcome as always.

cAPTAINsOREN

Also, finally fixed the transition into chapter 13: One Choice and removed the meta comment. Think it flows right now.
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