May I take a moment and get something off my chest?
I have a real problem with the way people publish things on this site that are, in a word, sloppy. There is no excuse for poor paragraph structure, grammar, capitalizations, especially when it comes to names. Come on, did some of you sleep through English when you were in school. It doesn't take that long to proof your work, and you use a free service like Grammarly, to correct grammatical mistakes. FanFiction.net specifies that if you're going to post something, make sure it's in an acceptable form. I work my butt off to make sure I've proofed, edited, and checked for grammar. If I can do it, why not someone else?