Tangible like sea cube !! To be honest the story had a potential but only at its start but the more you precede the more complicated it gets , many side characters kinda lost its objective!! And the reader interest all along !
What I am tryna say is you are good at what you are doing , you have a wild imagination and a beautiful way in writing !! Don't ruin it !!!
all you need to do is lay out a script at the start so that you know where are you going with your story , your hesitancy was obvious through your character so main idea at the start and then slow build up for both events and characters is what it takes for a trashy idea to be a great story ! You get me !?