Novel Girl

Hey guys, I'm starting a new story after a small time away from writing. I thought I would take some time to focus on one story and make it my best!
          
          I would appreciate some feedback on my first section just to make sure I'm headed in a good direction.
          
          Thank you!! :)
          
          After waking from a dangerous encounter, Emma suffers through a powerful case of amnesia. She knows she is different from others. As a girl with blue eyes in a world where brown eyes are the norm, she must learn to protect herself from the threats surrounding her. Her past begins to emerge through dreams and various encounters and she beings to recall who she really is, all the while discovering that there is more to her than she had originally known. 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/12459149-pushing-fate

Hey, lovely :) I would greatly appreciate it if you would come over and check out my new story, Madeover 0(^_^)0 Criticism and comments are greatly appreciated, btw! :]

@novel_girl thank you sooo much i am so excited, relieved, and thankful,  thanks :D

Oh and i'm sorry for not replying to your reply a few weeks ago. :D lol. Bye again i'll leave u alone now. For a little while :D jk

Hey i was wondering if you could give me your opinion on Making me forget a book that i'm writing I have a pretty cool cover but it's not really cool enough. Could you make me one for that book please? I kind of want it how it already is just maybe a little more AWESOME looking :D I kind of want to put it in Wattyawards maybe? Could you maybe read it too and give me your opinion? If it's not too much trouble. If it is thanks for everything else. :D Bye.

sure...I'm on it

Thanks for fanning!

@batmancraze no problem! thanks so much for becoming a fan!! im glad you like my story :) 

I started reading pushing fate and i really like it! thanx for leting me know about it!! <3

hey..mind reading my book?
          thnx!