Plot Point One
You're heading into Act II of writing or editing your novel. So how are you going to keep readers engaged? A great plot point will drive the story forward.
What Is Plot Point One?
Plot Point One is the point of no return. The character can't back out of the central conflict. This is the moment when the setup of the story ends and Act I is over.
But there's more. There must be something at stake. If the character doesn't care about the outcome, a reader won't care either.
The character is obligated to take action. The character is trapped. Turning back means returning to a life of unhappiness. The character's desire for something overrules all else.
Famous First Plot Points
Note: there are story spoilers, so don't read this section if you want to read the book or see the movie.
Gone Girl: Nick finds Amy's first treasure hunt clue. He has no choice but to follow it. Amy's life is at stake (as far as the reader knows).
The Martian: Mark Watney decides he won't die on Mars. To back out means to die — that's a lot a stake.
Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone: Harry Potter arrives at Hogwarts. He can't turn back. He can't get back on the train. That would mean life back with the Muggles and unhappiness.
Twilight: Bella learns that Edward is a vampire, but she loves him and decides to pursue him. Edward has emotional power over Bella.
Placement Of Plot Point One
Plot Point One should be somewhere around the 25% mark in your novel. If this plot point comes too late, the story will feel like it's dragging. If it comes too early, the story will feel rushed or lacking in depth.
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