I feel the need to say this due to all the comments on the prologue, but I'm not discouraging comments. I love them, and I'll gladly take any criticism for this book. However, I do understand how choppy and hard to read the first chapter is. I also understand that it really doesn't make that much sense.
I wrote this book almost entirely in 6th and 7th grade. It isn't that surprising that my writing sounds like it sometimes. I need to edit this book so much, I just don't have the time or inspiration. One day, I might even republish this with a slightly different plot to smooth everything over. But today is not that day. Tomorrow isn't that day either.
In simple words:
Prologue = Choppy
Rest of book = Less choppy
Ok, I'm done.
(Virtual cookies to anyone who actually read this!)
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The Servant Mate (complete)
WerewolfWhen young Ana, a servant girl, finds out that her mate is Alpha of her pack and the middle Prince of her city, she is too scared to show herself to him for fear that he will reject her and bring her family lower than it already is. There's only one...
