Unlike my previous reading requests, I will put up a criteria and beside each I will give you a comment.
Grammar and vocabulary: 5/5 (correctness of punctuation and spelling errors)
Rhythm and Sound: 5/5 (sentence fluency, length of events/paragraphs/sentences, frequency of repetition, is it timed with the story; how well it is written)
Character and dialogue: 5/5 (can i sense depth in the main character, is she/he/it boring? is the dialogue appropriate, is it too much or too little?)
Grip: 5/5 (is your story interesting? did it hook me from the beginning?)
Content: 10/10 (is it too cliché? Also determines the creativeness and impact on reader)
Overall: 30/30
Other comments/suggestions:
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