Author's name: thatTJgirl
chapters I've read: 6
my opinion: there are some mistakes when it's her Point Of View you aren't supposed to write she nodded as in herself nodding you should just say i nodded so that won't confuse the reader :), over all its a good start, for the second chapter it had so much drama going on and i loved it when the two guys turned to be brothers and as i said you should work on her Point Of view :) please update soon i really wanna know who was in the car
Rate: fair :)
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