Forbidden Love

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Author's name: thatTJgirl

chapters I've read: 7 

my opinion: the start was definitely unexpected! like that went too fast lol but it was good even thought you need to put the dialogues  between those things "" to avoid confusing the readers, there are few grammatical mistakes that needs to be corrected, you may want to edit your story some day :) i like this storyyyyyyyyyy

rate: good :)

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