POV switch practice

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original:

Ed loved his hamster, Hippy, and took good care of him. Before school, Ed would carefully feed Hippy. When he came home from school, Hippy would be so glad to see Ed that he would jump on his wheel and run as fast as he could. Sometimes Ed would let Hippy out to run around in his room.

me:

Ed loves me, Hippy the hamster, and takes good care of me. Since I'm his only child and I don't have a mom because poor Ed is single. Before school, Ed would carefully feed me. So I can waste all of our life and family savings then he can move out, he doesn't even pay rent to me. When he comes home from school, I would be so glad to see Ed that I would jump on my wheel and run as fast as I could. That means I can act busy so he doesn't bug me again like feed me carrots every now and then cause he wants me fat. Sometimes Ed would let me out to run around in his room. Then I can knock out all of his personal belongings and his mom would scold him. I love my life. 

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