swasan ki duniya(few Shots)✔

Shot 1

This is my ff.. swasan ki duniya.. pardon me for my mistake... this is the first episode... do read it and tell me how is it..
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The story took place after the incident of shrad of Swasan by Raglak and Shekhar has given divorce to Shomi and Raglak have moved to mm along with Ap and DP...

so here I go with the story ....

Swara- Sanskar hme hospital Jana
chahiye.. Ayush k pas...wo Akela hai...hmara pas koi nii hai..pr ayush k pas hm to hai...(wiping her tears and with a faint smile)..

Sanskar- ( wipes his tears).. haa chalo..mein maa ko bta deta hu..
both move outside and went to
Shomi in her room..

Sanskar- maa mein aur swara hospital jaa rhe hai aayush k pas...

Shomi- acha beta...( suddenly she started sweating very badly.. and fell on the ground.. and fainted)

Swasan ( unison) - maa...

Swara- maa ..uthiye naa please... Sanskar dekho naa maa ko kya hogya...( started crying)

Sanskar- Swara kuch nii hua hai...hm maa ko hospital leke chalte hai..

( sanskar carried shomi in his arms and along with swara,sujju and uttara... all moved to hospital)

in hospital...

sanskar- ( shout) doctor.. doctor...

Doctor comes..

Doctor- what happened to her?

Sanskar- Don't know.. she fainted suddenly... and was sweating badly..

Doctor- OK..nurse pls shift her to ICU..

swara- ICU...IC...u...kyu..( she stammers and started crying... sujju hug her and console her)..

Sujju- chup hoja chhori..kuch naa hoga thari maa ko..tu bhut Bahadur hai Na..chup hoja..

Doctor- mein check up karke aata hu..tab tak ap.paise jama kra dijiye..

Sanskar- jii doctor... swara mein abhi aata hu...

after 10 min doctor came..sanskar wasn't there....only sujju.. uttara and swara were present...

swara- ( weeping badly) doctor maa kaisi hai...

doctor- dekhiye...unhe kisi bat ka bhut gehra sadma pahuncha hai...bar bar kisi shekhar ji ka Nam le rhi hai..pls unhe bulwa dijiye.. unki halat bigadti jaa rhi hai...

swara- (shouts and cries) maa..pls doctor..

doctor- dekhiye hm kuch nii kr skte..
doctor leaves...

sujju- chhori ab ke kregi tu....

swara ( wipes her tears) - mein baba ko leke aayungi..chahe Jo bhi krna pde...

swara moves to Badi...there in hospital sujju inform sanskar about shomi ..all of them cry..

in Badi..

at the door step of dadi..
swara- baba pls..ek bar meri bat sunlo Na...pls baba...maa ko bacha lo..pls..mere saath chalo...meine apse
kbhi kuch nii manga ..baba pls..

dadi- ae chhori...mhara shekhar..thara koi baba waba naa hai...nikal ja yha se..

swara- ( crying badly) nhi mein baba ko leke jaungi..to shekhar..baba pls chaliye Na..

shekhar- swara tum jao..interrupt by a call as swara received call from hospital..

sanskar- ( on call ).. swara jaldi aao..maa tumhara naam le rhi hai..

swara- sanskar mein AA Rhi hu..tum
maa ka dhyan rakho..

swara moves to hospital.. without shekhar..

sanskar- swara maa tumhe bula rhi hai...
swara- haa..

she moves inside...and conversation of shomi and swara was mute..

swara( shouts) - nhi maa...ap aisa nii kr skti.. ap mjhe chhod ke nii jaa skti ..maa utho naa..maa ..pls..

sanskar and sujju and uttara come inside and saw shomi has died and
swara crying....sanskar hug swara and all of them cries...
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so guys done with first part.. do tell me how is it..