6- VITI

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Hello darlings, This is just a little note to inform you all that VITI's Pov will be under the head of the author's pov. This is to prevent the basic grammatical errors and mis-pronunciation. Optimistically, you will understand.

Another one thing that I wish to convey is that I have attempted to portray this chapter from a child's perspective. Certainly putting an adult into an abused child's shoes is difficult. Since we don't know how it works and how fragile it becomes. Unimaginable also.

Let me know if I went overboard with my writing in this chapter Or did I lack?.

Thank you so much. 
Hopefully I will be able to meet your standards.

**I like how Akul kissed the Ojas' forehead, their bickering, and everything else of course. ***

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Author's POV

One two three four five six seven eight nine ten. So many rings. I am Happy. So I hug Ethi bhaiya. And kiss too. Didi always did that whenever she was happy about something. And when I called her didi. I was happy because Ethi bhaiya bought me so many rings. 

I liked the Adik Bhaiya's rings but they were too big. Toooooo big. 

I like it here. He does not hit me. He does not put fingers in me. He says he will punish bad people. Bad people were too bad. They hit me and didi too. They did something else. Didi told me when she cried hugging me  and told me she will take everything on her and protect me. 

Ethi bhaiya says he will get me my didi. I miss her. Didi must be crying for me too now. I can get Didi here with me and I will do everything to not anger six brothers. I will ask Didi too. Didi and I will get food daily and permission for potty too. I drink water too. They do not hit me for that. But sir said we get only if I behave like a good girl. I will be a good girl.  

I smell nice. Adik bhaiya gave me a bath, new clothes, they are a little loose but they are warm. He said all six brothers will get me new clothes of my choice. Warm water. Warm food but I do not feel hungry and he said I should eat at least three times a day. But I am just a baby. How can I eat three times a day? They all are so huge like the neck of a giraffe so tall so they need more food but not me. 

Oh I like the ojas bhaiya too, he is so cute like me. Didi says I am cute. He is cute too. He smiles too. He buys me a cat soft toy too. Akul bhaiya bought me a color kit. How do I use it?? He did not tell me. I will ask him.  Will he get angry and punish me? But they say they will protect me and will always love me. Idea. 

My right hand is showing I should ask. Left hand is showing I should not ask. Now I will raise one hand that I want to do. 

Right /left

Right / left

Right / left 

Now I will raise my right hand because I want to ask. Easy peasy as didi says. Silly me. 

“How use umm color kit?”

“I will teach you. Come here.” Nil bhaiya said. 

I go to him. He opens the kit and asks me 

What color do you want , baby? 

There are so many. I like the darkest one. What is it called? Will he scold me now? I point to the color I like. He smiles at me. Ohhh means he is not angry. I get no hits too. Yeahhh. 

“Red. This color is called red.”

“Can I hold your hand?” No no no now he will hold my hand tight and put pen between my fingers no no no. 

“Viti.viti. Preciosa Calm down. It is okay. I am not hurting you.” Ethi bhaiya takes me in his lap and says. 

“I need to hold your hand so I can teach you how to hold color and how you can use to fill the pictures in the book.”  Nil bhaiya says

“It is okay. I will not hold your hands. Promise. Now you observe how I hold this color and color this shaljam (turnip). Okay.?”

I nod. 

“Solly solly. no nod. Yes. i look your hand.”

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600+ words.

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I will tell you that in the next chapter.

I guess, for now bye. Have a good day.

Do Or say something polite to people around you.
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