ACT I part 8: error and observation

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drake:who are they?

young jack:my family....I lived in an orphanage for my entire live and they were my family, my everthing but they are gone now

drake:....sorry for your loss

jack:its alright. alright back to business where to head to now

drake:*chuckles* you are going to like this

young jack: i dont trust that smile at all!

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drake:hey kid

jack:yeah drake?

drake:avoid that maid as much as you can

jack:huh? why?

drake:that maid is working for the overseer of shicksal, the overseer is someone you should never mess with. This man has caused many damages to the world even murdered billions like anti entropy. whatever you do don't get involved unless it endangers their lives

jack:....I"ll try to stay out of their radar as much as possible

drake:alright anyway lets go the exam is about start

jack:right lets go!

i then went and returned back to the exam area and saw the girls being tested

jack:you can do it kiana i believe in you!

she then got knocked back

jack:....I spoke too soon!

meanwhile with kiana

kiana:i wont be knocked out easily!

jack:you can do it kiana i believe in you!

kiana:huh!!?!? capitan!?!?

i then got knocked out of balance

kiana:grrrr!

jack:....I spoke too soon!

back with jack

i then saw kiana getting back up to fight again

jack:thats it you got her!

kiana then destroyed the lost honaki

theresa then came with rita and introduced her to the students. but rita was not focusing on them, she was focused on me than them.... she's planning something and i dont what it is but i will have to be careful

short time skip

it was now the last part of the exam before i do mine and the machine was malfunctioning causing kiana,mei and bronya to fight a emperor class honaki

jack:are guys okay

kiana:see capitan i'm strong

jack:i see that but is everyone okay

kiana:yes all of us are

jack:phew! thank god. alright theresa can i take the exam now

theresa:are you sure capitan it ran error you could get hurt

jack:pshhh! dont worry unlike these three i'm an expert

theresa:*signs* alright here enter and say your name and say prepare sync

i then enter the arena

jack:jack riding prepare sync

student:why is the capitan taking the exam

student2:I heard he made a deal with the principle

student3:he is going to lose

student4:yeah he is going to lose

system:sync ratio detected. sync ratio: 330 generatin..g ad...dversery.... moduuules.

i then saw 3 ganesha emperor class honkai being summoned

jack:well then lets dance!

i then got into stance and saw the first one charge at me i then use my sword to push it back. after that i jumped and landed above it and started stabbing the literal shit of it until i was able to make a hole small enough for a grenade. i then jumped down a head straight for the other two . i used my grappling hook to lock the both in place using the wires i then taunted the first one, and waited until it got up and charged again. but this time i dodged from a top of it and let it hit the other two i then planted a bomb in a the grenade sized hole and used my hook again too lock the three to each other. i then activated the so called 'bomb' and destroyed all three of emperor class honkai

system: candidate passed new record 25 seconds

jack:so did i pass?

i then look at the entire place to find everyone shocked to the core

jack:at anycase you should fix your system lets go you three i then grabbed shocked kiana and mei, while bronya was following me from behind

rita:*smiling menacingly* looks like the overseer will be happy

after that me and the girls were returning back to the dorm

kiana:i'm finally done... this so friggen' tiring

jack:yeah tell me about it-

kiana:ughhhh

she then suddenly almost fell on the ground

jack:mei and bronya a little help!

mei:oh my god!

jack:get theresa now

we then got theresa,rita and fu hua to check on kiana's condition

jack:Oh thank god she is waking up!

kiana:mei i'm hungery!

jack:dont worry we will eat the greatest lunch ever thanks to may. also rita may i speak to you privately

rita:i dont mind

it was now me and rita

rita:now what is it you want to talk about

jack:...rita rosseweisse. How much are you willing to sacrifice to satisfy his greed?

rita:....

jack:i have no problem with your overseer. but if he lays hand on any of my friends, i'll make him see hell that is worse than his current one!

jack:you may go now

with rita

rita:observation log 105-k423. subject made advancments in phyiscal and combat capabilities. The overseer can now move to a more practical...phase. it is also duly noted that subject jack riding can be a threat to shicksal.

meanwhile with drake

drake: otto,otto,otto what is it that you are going to do when he gets his hands on you. better yet what is your plan apocalypse?

we will see soon.....





A/n: hey guys sorry for not writing this chapter sooner.... well the next chapter will be released but it will be a slow release since i have school exams i hope you understand

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