EDITING - probs important lmao

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oOkay so please don't kill me i haven't updated since february...

But no okay i swear i was writing an update but then i was like nah man gotta get back into the mood of this fic so i went back and read it and I realized that some stuff doesn't make sense and there are some things that I could do to make the story better.

sooOo i'm gonna start editing the story. Basically just grammar stuff, tweaking some scenes, maybe adding some stuff/deleting some stuff and so on. Nothing huge, but enough that once I'm done editing you might want to go back and reread just so you haven't missed anything I've added on. 

I'm also going back and fixing a bunch of the spanish, and making everything go smoother. I never put in translations so I'm going to do that while I'm editing, and there will be less spanish as well. 

Anyway, I'm really sorry for the inconvenience, but I really think that fixing some past mistakes will get me in the mood for this fic and make writing it easier!! It shouldn't take me too long to edit anyway, and I will put a checkmark next to the title of each chapter I have finished editing! 

See you when I'm done!! 

EDIT TO THE EDIT: okay so i already finished editing, and if you wanted to go back and read, here are some of the most major changes:

-the scene when cadmus discovers his healing powers is different, and I changed it so that stiles wasn't the trigger anymore

-i added an entirely chapter after chapter eight, so that is the new chapter nine. i also combined two of the shorter chapters. 

-cadmus is not openly gay as of now. at the beginning of the fic, he is only out to allison. that will change as the story progresses; matt, gerard, stiles and danny also become aware of cadmus' sexuality by then end of chapter sixteen

-translations of the spanish are put in

-cadmus swears a lot more lmao

-cadmus is more in denial of his feelings for stiles and vice versa, so it's more slow burn

-other stuff im too lazy to remember haha

OKAY THANKS BYE

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