Amor! Amor! Amor!

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Amor! Amor! Amor!

Dear poet, no vintage is sweeter than yours.

Your purple pen wants for sense, there is none.

Beauteous Marvelous words rhyme too fine.

Rhymes sunder at your violet wit, yet,

Your readers high on purple wine are red
roses

Whining to your velvet lines. Amor! Amor! Amor!

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Pretty, eh?

Hello Friend! Thank you for reading my poem. You are too kind. I hope that this poem finds you well.

If you like please comment, share, and vote. I am also accepting of constructive criticism.

About this poem, it is meant to be a criticism and slight parody of poetry that is all beauty in words and imagery without filling.

What does this poem say to you? Most interpretations are valid.

In other writing news, I've been working on the structure of that novel I mentioned with my partner (it'll be a collaborative piece). It's been going well, and I'm simply busting to share it with you!

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