[HIATUS]
"Wrong city, wrong people."
(Y/N) Siren is a young adult attending his studies to follow his "mother's" footsteps to work for the Arasaka Corporation. He has no goal to work towards or any dreams. Though he has his talents, driving is one o...
Hello readers! Just before I start Chapter Four, how's the story so far?
Be honest.
I mean painfully honest if you have to.
My concerns in general: - Grammar - Storytelling - Clarification _______________________________________
Questions:
How's the plot?
Hows Y/N's character? - Quiet, sense of humor, determined, opposite to Rebecca - Becoming a driver - First impression with Rebecca - The Past with Dorio and Maine - Not fully forgiving them, but working with them, slow progress of forgiveness
Does it hook readers to continue reading or is it just one of those fanfics?
Is it too much or too light?
Are some parts unnecessary?
Too straight-forward?
Which part is not clear?
Is Y/N cringe?
Is Skyline R32 a good car for Y/N?
And don't worry about the lemon.
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YALL BE GETTING IT I PROMISE HVJSJDJSJC
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Toanswer some of your questions:
- Y/N won't be able to use weapons just yet, but he doesn't know that because of the cyberchip they inserted.
- Y/N and Rebecca are partners most of the time, which he wanted because of Chapter Two, he has no one to talk to, no words of affirmation, or listen to but only himself. The development will grow.
- Skyline is Y/N's main car.
- Y/N won't be wearing 'over the top' outfits. Classic car. Classic clothes. (Agree? Disagree?)
- Dorio will be sort of like a mother-figure for Y/N.
- David will be like a brother with Y/N.
- No love triangle.
When I get a few answers in, I'll be confident enough to write the next chapter. ^^
I'll do my best and wish me luck haha! See ya guys in bit!
