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Title: US v THEM
Author: Zombary-P
Grade: 81% B-
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Review:
Disclaimer: Obligatory "excerpts from the story titled do not belong to me". There are also excerpts from No One Mourns The Aftermath and Twenty-One, ongoing stories which can be found around Wattpad. I used small snippets solely as positive examples. And, of course, two of my stories make an appearance, one from Wattpad (Lost Destinies) and one from my drafts.
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So, I was told ahead of time that the author of Us v Them is French and writing in her second language, and I'm going to try to keep that in mind as I go through it. I'm in a particularly cheery mood and this is a short story so I get the feeling I'm going to end up keeping things pretty lighthearted. I've read some seriously HORRENDOUS books on Wattpad both from people whose first language is not English and whose first language is English, so honestly, the bar is pretty low and based on the description alone I don't think this one will have those kinds of major problems. Let's get right into it, shall we?
We've got another case of Uppercase Title Syndrome, but I'm going to let this one off the hook because a) it's still a way better title than A ROYAL SURPRISE, and b) I'm feeling nice today.
