*HARSH REVIEWER WARNING!*
We all know how Wattpad can be. Jaw-droppingly beautiful stories get less than a thousand reads while flaming piles of garbage riddled with cliches and contrivances that barely pass for plot reach into the millions and shoo...
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Title: Endearing ~ (HP x OC)
Author: Gryffindoritnb
Grade: 73% C
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Review:
Disclaimer: Obligatory "excerpts from the story titled do not belong to me". I swear there's only two references from my own stories, and one is just to share a joke. I'm getting less self-absorbed, I promise.
As much as I had fun reading this story, and it brought me a lot of nostalgia for my Harry Potter fandom days, I did have a LOT of critiques for it, so buckle up. If the writer is reading this, I hope something I've said helps :)
The first, glaring issue with this story is the astonishing lack of punctuation.
I skimmed the top of the first chapter, and upon realizing this, went back to look at the description. The description pretty much spells out this issue in big bold letters for you. Here it is in its entirety:
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Imogen Milton has never felt like she fit in her parent's idea of society or even the world for that matter after just discovering she is in fact a witch. But when the opportunity to attend Hogwarts the quote on quote school of magic arrives Imogen must face new challenges ahead. This includes also catching the eye of a famous young wizard who happens to go by the name of Harry Potter.
