Beginning ( RE-EDIT )

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( hey guys, so everyone know that this was my first fan fiction that i had written and finished. i decide to edit and re-edit making it way better then before so i hope everyone likes it )

Naruto -  3 years old

It was the middle of the night and everyone was sound asleep expect for those who were in the middle of chase " Why do i always have to run away " thought a young boy, no less then 5 as he ran as fast as his little feet could take him " get back here you demon " yelled some villagers as they ran behind him with some weapons on hand. this little boy was known as Naruto Uzumaki, he had blond hair, blue eyes and 3 whiskers on each cheeks. Naruto kept running until he took a right turn in an alleyway but it was one of the biggest mistake he could had ever taken " now what " thought Naruto as he turned around to escape but his eyes widen when he saw the shadows of the villagers as they came closer towards the alleyway 

Naruto backed away slowly " i have to try and get away from here " thought Naruto as he ran right pass the mob but his luck end when one of the villagers grabbed onto the collar of his shirt then he threw Naruto against the wall as hard as he could " itai " yelled Naruto as pain washed over his body but the pain was too great for a 5 year old so Naruto lend on the wall for support as he watch the villagers smirk when they saw that he was in pain " please let me go, i-i didn't do anything " mumbled Naruto but it was loud enough that the villagers could hear him as they closed in on him " you killed our family demon, you think we'll let you get an mercy " yelled all the villagers making Naruto shake his head in disbelief as he covered his ears, not wanting to hear anymore " I'm not a demon " yelled Naruto as tears roll down his face 

Demon 

Murderer 

Monster 

the villagers yelled some nasty things towards Naruto who tried so hard to cover his ears " make it stop, make it stop " thought Naruto as he shook his head even harder but then all of a sudden, Naruto couldn't hear anything anymore so he opened his eyes but then his eyes widen when he saw the villagers take out some weapons so Naruto closed his eyes as he prayed to god that they would leave but that was never the case " why aren't they help me " thought Naruto as he sense some of the Anbu's chakra that the Hokage place to protect him from any harm but what he couldn't see was that the Anbu's were enjoying the show from up in the tree where they were hiding " Jiji where are you when i need you the most right now " thought Naruto as he hope that the message would be delivery to the Hokage himself 

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in the heart of the village, stood a tower that was known as the Hokage tower where the leader of the village worked 24 hours a day " so much paper work " mumbled the Hokage as he sigh defeat when he saw the pile of paper work on his desk but then all of sudden, the Hokage who was known as Sarutobi felt a pain his chest " whats wrong " thought Sarutobi as he grabbed his chest because he didn't know what it was. after a few mins, the Hokage heard a clear voice that ran through his head ' Jiji help ' " Naruto " thought Sarutobi as he closed his eyes but once he reopened them " Dog " screamed Sarutobi as he got up from his chair in the exact moment that  an Anbu appeared in front of him " what is it hokage-sama " asked the Anbu with a dog mask " find Naruto, NOW " said Sarutobi as he screamed the last " will do " said the Anbu with the dog mask before he shunshined away " please be safe " thought Sarutobi as he turned around then he looked outside the window

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the villagers finally finished what they step out to do which felt a bloody Naruto on the floor " everything hurts " thought Naruto as he let the darkness take over him " I'm finally free " thought Naruto as he smile for the last time but then all sudden he opened his eyes when he didn't feel anymore pain. Naruto looked around and saw that he was flooding in what seem to be water inside of a tunnel with many openings so he stood up covered in water from head to toe. Naruto walked around what seem like hours but then all of a sudden he stopped when he heard " come here " called out a demonic voice " who's there " call out Naruto as he looked around but he couldn't see anyone or anything " follow my voice and you'll see " said the demonic voice making Naruto roll his eyes when he didn't have a decide so followed the voice to see where it led him too

Naruto was panting as he finally made it to where the voice led him to" it took you long enough " said the demonic voice when he saw Naruto in front of his cage " i can't see you " said Naruto as he looked looking inside the cage that was cover in darkness" do you see me now " asked the demonic voice as he stuck out his claws through the cage before he reveal himself to Naruto who eyes widen when he saw a big fox with nine tails " y-you're the nine tails fox " stuttered Naruto as he pointed at the fox " you know who i am " asked the Kyuubi " well course i do but what are you doing inside that cage " asked Naruto as he grabbed one of the kyuubi claw " hehehe so soft " said Naruto but then the kyuubi pulled way and looked at Naruto as if he was crazy 

the kyuubi eyed Naruto for a while before he spoke" your not scared of me " asked the Kyuubi   making Naruto shake his head from side to side " should i " questioned Naruto as he tilt his head just slightly" well " said the Kyuubi  but he was cut off by Naruto which didn't seem to please the kyuubi what so ever " answer my question first, why are you seal in that cage " asked Naruto as he pointed at the cage" well, your father seal me inside here " said the Kyuubi  " wait! what?? the fourth is my father " yelled Naruto " well " said the Kyuubi  but once again Naruto cut him off " that makes so much sense now " said Naruto as he pace back and forth 

the Kyuubi was already pissed by being cut off the first time " don't interrupt me you damn brat " yelled the Kyuubi making Naruto stop in his track then he looked up at the kyuubi as he rubbed the back of his head " hehehe sorry " said Naruto which surprised the kyuubi a lot. the kyuubi looked at Naruto and was about to speak once more but once again Naruto interrupt him " what happened during the night, you attacked the village " asked Naruto as he stared into the kyuubi eyes " this damn brat don't understand the definition of  ' don't interrupt me ' " thought the Kyuubi as he got a tick mark on his forehead that Naruto fail to see because he was talking on his own " very well, I'll tell you since you want to know so much " said the Kyuubi as he picked Naruto up with one claw and pointed another claw on Naruto's forehead. once the Kyuubi finished showing Naruto what real happened that night and once it was over, Naruto was left crying " why are you crying kit " asked the Kyuubi  " because my parents die to protect me, i was loved by them. everyone always told me that by my parent didn't love me and that was the reason to why they abandoned me " said Naruto as he cried " I'm sorry kit, its my fault that they die " said the Kyuubi making Naruto shake his head " its not your fault, you were being control by that Uchiha guy " said Naruto as he wiped his tears but then he looked up at the Kyuubi and saw the disbelief look on his face " you're smarter then you seem " said the Kyuubi as he smile a little " i could manage " said Naruto making the kyuubi huff as he looked away" i'll tell you what kit, i'll train you to become strong so you could stand on your own 2 feet " said the Kyuubi  making Naruto jump up and down with joy " really?? you are mr. fox " asked Naruto but then he notice a hug tick mark on the kyuubi forehead  

the kyuubi eyed twitched in annoyance " don't call me that kit " said Kyuubi  " well then, whats your name then "asked Naruto but then he saw the same disbelief look on the kyuubi face like before " did i say something wrong " asked Naruto making the kyuubi shake his head " its Kurama, kit " said Kurama making Naruto smile towards him " its nice to meet you Kurama, Uzumaki Naruto is my name " said Naruto as he pointed at himself " wait whats happening to me " asked Naruto when he saw the darkness take over " you're waking up kit, but don't worry we'll meet again" said Kurama " when is that "asked Naruto " soon " said Kurama as he smiled a little when he saw Naruto waving goodbye " bye Kurama " echo throughout once the darkness finally took over 

............TO BE CONTUINED 





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