ANIMALISM | Lookism x Parody! Delinquent! Reader [ CURRENTLY EDITING ]

☾To clear things up☽

To make the reader slightly more inclusive, I drew some of these girls up :)!

Introducing the Mountain Lions!

I'm going to be here to explain and redo some plot holes I found in my story, if there's more plot holes please list them here. Thank you very much!

SPOILERS AHEAD DON'T READ IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE ELI JANG SAGA

Eli Jang
Some of y'all might know that I started Animalism back in July 27, 2017 where the official English translation only had about ~50 Chapters.

So it's clear to say that I didn't know that Eli

(spoiler)

Was a goddamn dad with the saddest goddamn back story I think I've ever read in a manhwa. And that I totally didn't cry during the ending.

And I feel so guilty that my teenage hormones took over to make this entire reverse harem of men that included a previously abused, heart broken single dad.

Once again, I don't advise writing a fan fiction on something that isn't finished because it's most likely that some things won't add up to the original source material. And that you'll sound like a total dick writing a romance with the saddest backstory/person I've ever seen.

So to make it up, the slightly matured young adult about to go to college me is going to put my hand down and say.

No

I can't write Eli Jang off as another Lookism character with no story behind him. I'm so disappointed in myself like what the heck. From now on what Eli has with Y/N is nothing more but for amusement and friendship unless I'm able to write them together in a more mature way.

I mean come on! Eli lost his baby mama for Christ sake.

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"Eli forgive me" Y/N kneel. before him in his class, every other female student watching the commotion while gossiping.

"Omg What is she doing?"
"Is she crazy?"
"What's a delinquent like her wanting to do with Eli?"

"Um, Y/N? Are you feeling okay?" Eli smiles nervously, looking down on you as he extends a hand "Come on, get up you're scaring me"

You took it, gripping his hand as manly tears drips down your face. This surprised him and everybody else in the room, evidently giving them a chill up their spine.