Rats: Shai's Story

The Derby

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By the time Shai got home it was almost Curfew. She couldn’t stay in the lobby of that apartment building long before she became suspicious, and she didn’t know if Riley would stay out on the corner. It seemed unlikely, but she didn’t want to take any risks.

            She pushed her way into the elevator when it was full of people. She waited for everyone else to get off and then went up onto the next floor. She crept down the hallway, trying not to let the floor creak under her feet. At the end of the hallway she opened the door to the stairwell.

            Prying the window open with her fingers, she slipped out onto the metal staircase that was on the back of every building. She climbed down the ladder quickly and dropped to the ground with the last step. She was hidden by the narrow space between the two buildings.

            She peered around the corner to check and see if she could see Riley. The coast was clear and she walked behind another group of girls about her age. She followed them before taking a sharp turn down another alley. She was far enough away from Riley’s booth that being caught by him was no longer a fear. The Officer standing in front of the alley was the only thing that stopped her from walking straight across the Market street.

            Walking with the crowd of people she noticed that Officers were blocking off more and more alleys. A slight fear rose in Shai as she wondered if every alley was being blocked off.

            Finally, she discovered one that’s not and slipped down it. She feared that an Officer would chase he down and question her, but she knew she was sly enough for no one to catch her.

            Hearing voices made her take a longer route home then she would like. But the people on the street in the Slums would kill her, especially with that bracelet on her wrist.

            She climbed up the stairs at the back of her apartment and opened the window and pushed the cardboard out, expecting Todd to still be with whatever girl he was meeting. But she was wrong and he was lying down on the couch flipping the blade in and out of his pocketknife.

            “How’d it go?” he asked her.

            She closed the window and put the cardboard back in place. He sat up on the couch and put his knife down on the table.

            “Well, I got this,” she said displaying her wrist in front of Todd. His eyes light up and he grabbed her hand and pulled it right in front of his eyes.

            “You got this on a first date?” he asked astonished.

            “Yeah, Brighties are so odd. He even asked me to marry him today,” she said.

            “Make sure it’s a big diamond.”

            “I’m not marrying him, Todd!”

            Todd laughed and shook his hair out of his eyes. Shai went into her room and threw her bag down on her bed. She took off her dress and remembered Riley’s comment about the sand as the grainy substance was stuck to her skin. She wiped it off quickly and put one of Todd’s old shirts with the hem all torn and a pair of black sweatpants. She pulled her hair out of the elastic and she fiddled with the clasp on the bracelet.