🌟Aquarius Results🌟

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Thank you to aysiasworld Back_slash_nash and SamEl145 for giving their valuable time to read and give such wonderful reviews.
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🌟 The first place goes to: 🌟

Name of book: Loving too Much...To Kill!
Name of Author: theashesofthephoenix
Total score: 74
Review: For Wattpad, this is a very unique way to tell a story. From just the first five chapters, the plot seems to be quite simple. But I still found the story itself to be really engaging and entertaining. I was hooked.

It incorporates a subtle type of humor with very well-drawn illustrations. The author has managed to tell quite a bit with very few words (although there is an advantage of using comics here to show facial expression and actions). The characters were well defined and a few conflicts were made apparent.

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🌟The second place goes to:🌟(it's a tie)

Name of the book: bad prince charming
Name of the author: Passmetheadobo
Total: 70
Review: your blurb is amazing, as the fact that this story is taken from the fairytale cindrella but on a total different notation is really good, the plot is amazing and the way you have introduced the characters really catches the reader's attention and pulls them into the story which keeps them on wondering what will happened next, the main attention is caught when the readers are trying to wonder who the guy asking her for a dance was which is finally revealed after few chapters, this keeps the reader engrossed into it untill they find out who it is. You really tantalized me with your blurb which made me eager to judge your book. As an overall this is a really good book and can be read over and over again without the reader getting bored

Name of the book: The whims of tragic Seraphim
Name of the author:  BadAssPeaBrain
Total: 70/80
Review: The humor was fantastic. The plot was good and the writing style was fantastic. Keep up the wonderful work!

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Name of book: Pistachio girl
Name of Author: ilickcupcakes
Total score: 66
Review: Overall, the first five chapters are very humorous. The scene at the very beginning was interesting and memorable. The creativity of it was amazing. It was a great way to introduce us to the main character’s (Lea’s) mind and nature. Lea comes across as being really complex, and some of her flaws are very easy to catch on to. For this story in particular that seems to work really well. I’ll also add that the dialogue amongst the characters is quite smooth.

One of the major issues I found had to do with punctuation. There were a lot of places where certain marks should have been but weren’t. Lastly, while I hope that many of the characters mentioned will show up again later in the book, I also hope that the author will focus a bit more on developing the primary conflict (between Lea and Megan).

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Name of the book: Over a cup of tea
Name of the author: divineEarth
Total: 65/80
Review: It was funny and interesting. I loved how Indian marriage was portrayed. It shows the struggles of an Indian in an arranged marriage in an entertaining way. The author can still improve more on writing style and pay more attention to the minor grammar errors.

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Other books scores and reviews

Name of the book: Random shit
Name of author : @QueenofSass8
Total score : 50
Review : This story is a person's journal and it's supposed to be relatable I agree on that basis that some things are but some are not that much. This book is not bad it's good but it's not catching the readers interest . When you are reading this book you tend to end up reading atlast the first ten chapters but the readers interest is lost after that . The characters in this story is introduced in the beginning but as you read along you don't tend to remember the characters so well so in thet case I would insist you to introduce them before you start some conversation and mention if it's a he or a she. Overall this book is good just a little bit of modifications and it can be better

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Name of book: If wishes did come true
Name of Author: chomboy123
Total score: 61
Review: Overall, the first five chapters were very entertaining. The reader is put right into the situation described in the blurb. The way the author switched between POVs in some chapters was one of my favorite parts about it. It was nice seeing the same parts of the story from two different perspectives. Additionally, the dialogue really doesn’t hold back. Some of the exchanges felt like a punch in the gut, but it seems as if that was the author’s intention. In this way, the author showed their skills at swaying their audience’s opinions.

The characters’ personalities really stand out in the dialogue. But I would encourage the author to add more details about the scenes and try showing the readers a bit more about the characters, rather than telling. There were quite a bit of grammar and punctuation related mistakes, and I found them to be a bit distracting. However, many of them looked like easy fixes.

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