Chapter 1 - Neil's Confession

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Note: The scene starts after Neil shows the video to Avni, and then confesses his love and hugs her. That entire scene and all the dialogues will remain same. The story will start just after that conversation.

Also, please note that I will try to write it in English as much as possible, but sometimes, especially in the conversations I will use Hindi words also.

Avni was peacefully lying in Neil's arms, while streams of tears were still flowing down her cheeks. Around 2 hours have passed since Neil had come to meet her, and since then, they could not get apart from each other. They were very lucky that Mogli was sleeping 😊, otherwise, they could not have enjoyed these devine moments.

But their dreamy moment was disturbed by a phone call on Neil's phone. When Avni looked at the screen, she could see Mitali's name flashing. At that very moment, she woke up with a jolt, separating herself from Neil.

As he felt Avni separating from him, Neil woke up too, and stared at the mobile screen. As soon as he saw Mitali's name, his expressions changed to extreme anger. He was going to pick up the call in that mood only, but Avni stopped him.

"Neil, ye kya kar rahe ho?"

"Avni, main Mitali se baat karke sab kuch clear karna chahata hun. Main usse pyaar nahi karta yaar! Maine usse Engagement sirf tumhe dard dene ke lie kiya tha. And ab mujhe ye saara natak khatam karna hai, please!"

"Nahi Neil! Tum is tarah se ek masoom ladki ki zindagi barbad nahi kar sakte!"

"Masoom?? Kaun masoom hai Avni? Mitali? Usne jo tumhare saath Kashid me kiya wo sab kuch bohot masoom tha? Avni tumhe nahi pata, aaj bhi wo kitna jalti hai tumse. And wo dheere dheere Mogli ke life me bhi ghusne ki koshish karegi. Main aisa nahi hone de sakta Avni"

"Buassss.... Buss Neil, bohot hua! Ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo Neil, agar mere wajah se kisiko bhi koi dukh pohuncha, to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi. Aur main tumhe bhi kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi Neil!"

"Kya? Theek hai phir tumhi batao ki ab main kya karun?"

"Tum is video ke bare mein kisiko kuch nahi bataoge. Jaisa chal raha hai waisa hi chalne doge. Aur.."

"Aur kya? Bolo..."

"Aur tum kal Mitali se shaadi karoge Neil"

"Nahi Avni. Nahi. Main ye nahi kar sakta. Baaki sab theek hai par shaadi karne ko mat kahana."

"Neil tumhe kya lagta hai. Agar tumne ye Shaadi nahi ki to tum dobara mujhe pa loge? Nahi Neil! Agar tumne Mitali se Shaadi nahi ki, to tum hamesha ke lie mujhe aur Mogli ko bhi kho doge"

"Kya... Accha theek hai. Jaisi tumhari marzi. Par, meri ek sarth hai"

"Kya sarth?"

"Tum Kal Palghar nahi jaogi. Infact tum kabhi waha nahi jaogi"

"Par Neil, mere job ka kya. Main Mogli ke padai ka kharcha kaise chalaungi?"

"Tum job karogi. Par waha nahi. Tum waha fruit farm me job karne wali thi na? To uske lie waha jaane ki kya jaroorat hai? Mumbai se bas 1km door mere ek dost ka Fruit farm hai. Unhe bhi manager chahie. Tum waha job le lo. Tum aur Mogli paas me hi rahogi, to main jab chahe jaakar mil paunga. Bus itni si hi sarth hai meri. To bolo. Raazi ho?"

" Accha theek hai"

"😊 That's like my girl 😎"

By that time, Mogli, who was sleeping in the next room, had waken up. As soon as he heard Neil's voice, he got up from bed and ran towards him.

"Papaaa!!"

"Heyy mera tiger, kaisa hai tu?"

"Papa, I am so happy ki aap mujhse milne aye. Mujhe to laga tha ki aap phir kabhi mujhse milne nahi aoge"

"Aisa kyun 🤔?"

"Wo Mitali aunty ne Mumma se kaha tha ki.."

"Mogli! Chup! Ekdum chup! Jao jaakar Homework karo"

"Why? Kya kaha Mitali ne?"

"Unhone kaha ki wo aapse shaadi karegi aur phir mere saath.."

"Mogli! Kaha na chup! Kitni baar kahana padega jao jakar padhai karo"

Hearing Avni screaming, Mogli got scared and ran towards his room. But Neil stood right there, looking sternly at Avni for answers.

"Neil, bohot der ho rahi hai. Ab tumhe bhi wapas laut jana chahie. Warna sab tension karne lagenge".

"Pahale batao Mitali ne kya kaha?"

"Neil tum bacchon ke baaton ko itne seriously lete ho?"

Neil understood that Avni is not going to tell him anything. So he didn't force much.

"Accha theek hai. But meri sarth yaad rakhna. Main kal mere dost ko tumhara number de dunga. Wo tumhe call kar lega."

"Umm..mera number nahi hai tumhare paas"

Just then Neil remembered that he had never given his personal number to Avni, and he didn't have her number as well. They always used to communicate through Sweta, Bebe, or their home's land-line number.

"Main email ID de dunga. Wo tumhe details mail kar dega. Tumhari mail ID hai mere paas, wo sukoon ghar wala".

"Okk"

"So, bye"

"Yeah.. Bye"

Neil turned towards the door and started walking out. Avni kept watching his back throughout. She could not believe that his Neil was talking to her again. He had hugged her and even kissed her today. She was sooo happy, but sad at the same time, as tonight was his last night with her. From tomorrow onwards, she will have no right on him. He is going to be someone else's tomorrow, he is going to be Mitali's, forever!



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