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From the Outside Book Review @kissaphrodite

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Hi kissaphrodite.

                          
So after reading your book, I have actually really enjoyed it, like I always do. Stella is a very strong-personality girl, but well, every girl must have a soft side, right? :) And Toby. Toby took her heart, but I have a bad feeling he will rip it out again.

                          
Well, overall, grammar, writing style is very good, you should continue your own style. Storyline is unique, but try to write something more than just heartbreak. Maybe some more drama? I'm sure your followers will KILL for it! :D

                          
I don't feel like I like Rosemary because it's obvious she's a bully to Stella. Keep up the good work! :)

                          


                          
bloodydirewolf xox
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