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3rd person
Somewhere over the rainbow (Away from riddick and sinner and to Fry) we are now already in the hole searching for Zeke, well fry is.
"It's hollow" Fry thought as she stood inside the cavern inside the hole. She continued looking around til she thought she heard something moved behind her. She looked behind her and saw nothing. She looked around again and heard the sound again. She still couldn't see it.
She started panicking and started climbing up one of the spires "I'm in here" she yelled as kept climbing up. "I'm in here, I'm inside" she kept yelling.
Sinners POV
"And they actually went into the hole" I muttered to myself as me and riddick heard fry yelling. Riddick started banging his chains to the wall behind him. "Hmm" I thought "Will she live?, or will they kill her?" I continued thinking as riddick continued banging.
Nathan's POV (if anyone forgot about him then good but he is the mercenary that 'captured' Sinner)
As we continued standing waiting for fry to come back out. "Wait she's pulling on the rope, pull her out quickly!" I yelled as we pulled. But we heard her voice and ran to one of the spires and broke it open to pull her out.
"It's ok, we got you, we got you" john said pulling her out. "I heard you fry!, I heard you first" Jack said. "Thank god you're ok" I said to her. "Did you find him!? Did you find Zeke?!" Shazza asked. " ...wasn't Riddick...it was...it was...goddamn, that was stupid....but wasn't Riddick. Somethin' else down there that got Zeke and nearly got meeeeeee" Fry said something pulling her back into the hole.
I saw her hold on to the outside of the spire and I ran to her, got out my knife and cut off the chain. We all saw the chain go down into the hole and we got fry.
Sinners POV
'Hmm' I thought as me and riddick heard everything. He stopped banging and cocked his head to the side watching me. "What do you want" I said to him still listening out for the others. "You know what's down the spires don't you?" He said moving his to push against mine.
"Haha yes I do, and if I remember correctly we only have matters of hours before everything goes to shit" I said laughing while figuring out a way to get out of these chains. "Interesting" riddick said as he leaned back into his 'seat'.
We saw Johns and Nathan's approaching so we just sat still. Riddicks head down while I just looked straight into Nathan's eyes and saw fear in his eyes. 'Good' I said in my head and smirked. "Got a problem Nathan?, you looked stressed" I said mockingly turning my smirk into an outright smile showing my sharp teeth.
"Found something worse than us huh Johns" riddick said looking into Johns eyes. "Were movin'. And I'm just wondering if I shouldn't lighten the load right now." He said. Now their eyes meet. He ratchets his shotgun and points it at Riddick's head.
"As if he would shoot his only source of money" I thought. "And what about me Nathan?, are you going to kill me as well?" I said mockingly. The gun shoots and it hits the chain freeing Riddick. While Nathan just said "I hope you don't kill anyone" and he unlocks the chains on my wrist.
"Of course not Nathan" I said slyly and dare I say sexily? As I got up and kissed Nathan on the cheek. He may be a Merc but damn he was hot. I heard a growl and saw Riddick come towards me going outside.
As soon as we were out of site from the mercs, Riddick pushed me against the steel wall by my neck. "You really shouldn't touch anyone around me Sinner" he said while biting hard at my neck again in the same spot.
He pulled away "This mark means you are MINE no one else's and if I see you touch another male I will kill them and give you a punishment" he growled in my ear. I flipped us over and pushed him against the wall.
"Just because you marked me does not mean I will be your bitch Riddick, I will never bow down and I admit you are my mate but the same applies. If you touch another woman I will also touch them and not only that but also you will get punished. And I am good at that. As I whispered to him.
I pulled away and walked into the hot sun while swaying my hips. Hearing his growl made me smirk. We got a long way to go.
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Whoa again sorry but I at least made this chapter had a kick to it. Hope you guys like it.
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