How To WRITE Awesomely

Blurred Lines

Okay, so technically this book is over, but I've decided to add chapter in whenever I felt like it.

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Blurred Lines

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Twists and turns in novels are scary.

You never know what will happen next, or who will close in on your main charaxter. Safety is your last concern.

Here, I'll give you five ways to blur the lines between good and evil.

1. The Hero Doesn't Know Who to Trust

First, even if we as writers know very clearly who the "bad guys" are, it should take longer for the hero and the reader to figure it out. In The Dark Knight, there are many dirty cops who work both for the police force and the mob.

• Harry Potter assumes that Snape is evil, not Prof. Quirrell.

• Katniss assumes that Peeta is trying to kill her, even when they are working together.

• Bella explains that there is a part of Edward that thirsts for her blood (but she is not sure "how dominant that part might be").

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2. The Hero Clashes With Good Authority Figures

There aren't just two sides in the hero's battle. Instead, there are "tiers" of good characters- and these characters have different motivations. In The Dark Knight, we saw the conflict between Batman's vigilante status and the traditional justice system.

• Even though Prof. McGonagall is good, she is still in charge of disciplining Harry Potter and the Gryffindors. Her motivation is to follow the school rules.

• Haymitch is in charge of mentoring Katniss, but they have their own conflicts, especially when Haymitch insults Katniss's interview skills. His motivation is to keep the tributes alive (as long as it doesn't interfere with his drinking).

• In Twilight, Billy Black is in charge of his tribe, which includes making sure that the vampires don't break their pact and harm any humans. Billy Black conflicts with Bella when he is worried that Edward will turn her into a vampire. He is motivated to protect human life.

3. Other Good Characters Conflict With Each Other

It isn't all about the hero! In The Dark Knight, Commissioner Gordon and DA Harvey Dent struggle with their relationship. Just like in real life, the hero is aware of conflict around him between the people in his life, even if he's not directly involved.

• Hagrid accidentally betrays Dumbledore by telling a stranger how to get past the guard dog Fluffy.

• Effie Trinket is embarrassed and disgusted by Haymitch's drunken behavior.

• Billy Black keeps a secret from his good friend Chief Swan by not tattling on Bella for dating a vampire.

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4. The Villain Cannot control every Bad Guy

In a perfectly evil world, the villain would have complete control over his henchmen, and no one else to worry about. But just as The Dark Knight's Joker has to deal with mafia goons, our villains struggle to keep all the bad guys in line. After all, it's hard to keep an evil character perfectly loyal.

□ The reader understands that President Snow is displeased by the Gamemakers when they allow both Peeta and Katniss to win The Hunger Games.

□ Harry Potter overhears Prof. Quirrell crying due to his conflicting feelings about serving Voldemort.

□ In Twilight, Laurent breaks away from his coven leader James. Laurent warns the Cullen family that James will hunt down Bella.

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5. The Hero turns on his friends, and society turns on HIM.

In an "all is lost" sort of moment, it seems like everyone has turned his back on the hero. Even though the outcome of his final battle will affect everyone, the hero must fight it alone.

○ In Harry Potter, Gryffindor House as a group is angry with Harry for losing so many house points (after he got caught while helping with Hagrid's dragon).

○ In The Hunger Games, the reader understands that Gale will be hurt by Katniss after she acted in love with Peeta on TV.

○ In Twilight, Bella must emotionally hurt her dad in order to protect him from the evil vampires.

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A powerful theme of good and evil emerges when readers grapple with the moral issues themselves.

Is it okay that Katniss killed other tributes? Is it fine that Edward Cullen might take Bella's mortality? Should Harry Potter just do what his teachers tell him to do?

The secret is not to shove good and evil down anyone's throat- a strong theme comes from realism, and in real life people act within a spectrum of good and evil.

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Thanks for reading this installment of Absolutely_Positive ' s How to Write!