The face of the bright morning star Look ahead and face the new day Must see if you could reach that far All is lost and all is astray Seek the bright morning stars up high And see if tragedy passed by Be the one to witness failure Of a strong soul, one could be sure
The bright morning star of ancient Have been watching me fall apart Watching my most tragic descent And wanting me to take heart But I was broken and shattered My good deeds have all been scattered My soul was cast to oblivion And became my condemnation
Oh! So bright and strong for a star Who can never be my savior While watching his child gather scars How strong its bright heart would tear more Streams of his love he has given His child is me, I was taken Away from him, whose heart suffered For too long, Death shall be offered
I stared high upon slavery Wondered if he had been caring About his lost child, about me I doubted him, and start running Away from him, many are the lies That surrounded me and cut ties That day, I went back to my home And he was gone, returned to loam
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Six days after that previous poem, I wrote this ode as a way to review for my English test that talks about adverbs. I know, rad.
This is an ode, following the traditional structure of an ode (I googled, don't come at me) and I think I butchered the eight syllables per line part. Hey, I tried.
This poem has some sort of mythological vibe there. I remember having the narrator be a child of the sun and they went away for a while. The sun kept on calling them back just to see them one last time and they wouldn't go. When they do go back, they found out that the sun has died.
Sad.
So, in your lives, don't ever ignore people who are reaching out. Maybe they need to see you one last time too.
What do you think of the poem? Comment below. :)
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