Contest:: She

217 0 0
                                    

I entered a contest, not winning which is fine but i enjoyed writing this. It could not be over 300 words and it was either the second ,,or third I don't remember, chapter to a story on deviantart. I read it just now sort of admiring the amount of detail that was poured into this undeveloped character who wasn't even mine.

By the way she just entered the Light Train. What the Light Train is, I don't know but she's on it and trying to find her way back home in one piece.

Her pale fingers slid over the frigid glass, drawing incoherent lines. She gazed in her reflection, to notice a golden locket shining back at her pale blue covered eyes. Her fingers had unknown red stains that she did not bother to acknowledge, as she grabbed toward her neck to detach the heart shaped locket from her body. Her nails dug between the metal only to see a photograph of an unfamiliar man. As her curiosity grew she discarded the useless treasure and took out the photo. On the back scribbled in minuscule script where words that spoke of love and time.

“Excuse me Miss, I need to see your boarding pass.” She turned her head toward the monotone voice. A broad man towered over her seat, leaving her to sit in darkness. “What boarding pass?” She asked squeezing her words out; words felt like bitter soap to the taste that wandered too long. “The object that allowed you to get on this train.” His black eyes seemed endless as they stared at her blue ones. “Where is it?” he growled sticking out his hand to her face, which contained nothing but pure confusion. “Oh, sir it is right here!” she chirped dropping her gaze from the man to her pocket to pull out a pass. “No it isn’t give it here.” He demanded to know where her train ticket was. “If you do not have one, I am to kick you off the Light Train.” He touched her wrist to grab, only to feel a sharp pain emit from her. “What did you do to me?” The ticket master enquired.

 “What did I do?” her eyes following his movements “Ahem, here is your boarding pass.” The man grumbled as his body bent over to pick up a golden locket.

By the way to those of you who've read this and actually read this >,< If ya want we can continue this story all contributing a chapter or two until it's fit to end. I certainly cannot write a story like this on my own. It's so difficult and time is nonexistent.

You've reached the end of published parts.

⏰ Last updated: Apr 20, 2012 ⏰

Add this story to your Library to get notified about new parts!

Random one-shotsWhere stories live. Discover now