Book: Choices
By: @aYtMaD
Review:
Sorry for the late review and thanks for the wait. So here you go.
This is a very well written book. Im quite amazed because of the correct use of metaphors and your grammar and way of writing is quite impressive! Very poetic too which is really hard to pull of. Its a very different book and quite unique. It isnt the typical cliche writer books you see on here about the broken problematic girl with a lot issues to deal with and life too. Its written in the way it should. Its so sad but realistic and very deep. The 3 problems that annoyed me are -
a) The writing of sentences in full capitals. If you're trying to convey a emotion try punctuation like the exclamation mark. Capitals should be used only for names, places and the beginning of sentences and I in general only.
b) The short chapters. I want a bit more inside on her.
c) This bugged me a lot. why isnt your book got the recognition it needs. This is a real book with proper grammer and writing style used and interesting and unique. A lot of people wont like books like this but thats okay and a lot wont be bothered reading books like this nowadays cause its isnt written all clique already done in weird for of grammer sort of way. Like In other words a lot of bad popular books which are considered proper and good on wattpad but a really bad copied version of another good book. This book needs to be read cause the emotions are so real tbh.
the suspense is good. Just a few mistakes in other chapters but you can fix that. In other words this is a very realistic interesting deep book. I like it. I hope your book ends well like it was from the start, so dont lose track and i look forward in seeing her change in this book and her life cause these are real things happening to real life people in real life. Its sad but I had always loved things realistic because they were real and not made up. I dont know whether that made sense but i think i went a lot out of topic here. Sorry, i do that a lot. I hope this helped, love
So go check it out now!!!
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