Title: Terrible things
By: Lucyyy5SOS
Fanfiction*( a Luke Hemmings fanf fiction)
Overall its a good book. Its like and maybe something like 'How i met your mother'. Wish the chapters were bit longer . Although its a bit unrealistic, Its unique and a cute story. One word ? Sweet. I like it and if you love 5sos then I think you may like this one. It different than some of the fan fictions I have read. More description is needed for the readers to know whats happening and the summary is okay but not captivating. Make it more captivating like you want the readers to look at it and be like " now i got to definitely read about the book".There's room for improvement here. Also keep it simple and not over the top. Lately I recommend the book, its new and she's a good writer with potential for so much. Big potential here so keep and eye on her. Its a cute fan fiction, you should go check out :) I like it and i think its a unique love story than the other fan fiction normally written these days. Its adorable and please go check it out and her other books!!!
Hope you'll go check it out right now!!
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