Book: Milliseconds until Freedom
By: veronicakruschel
Review:
Its very very well written and your grammer is spot on which quite impressive if you ask me. This is a really cute short story and it is very good. Unique. Did it win? It had to be comended at least or recongnised and you're quite young so its pretty good for your age, when there are so many older people who cant even write proper english as good as you. Wait that was harsh but you know what i mean, proper grammer, proper phases and sentence to proper english. So be proud of yourself. You deserve to be place with the top. So good luck with that. Why did it have to end like that though? What a twist. Its so cute and i personally like it so much. Its amazing. So i hope this helped and keep on writing maybe you can write a book next? I know i would read it. Its so well written and interesting,different, unique and realistic. So realistic and beleivable. Her emotions can be felt too. A job well done.
Im sorry i like to sound a bit british when im obviously not. I love england.
So go read it now!!
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