book: dangerous
author : @vivant
zayn malik fan fiction*
Before i get to this this is a mature content book , its rated R for a reason. So back to the book, its a well written, interesting book with good grammar. Its really interesting and as i read on i really wanted to read more and thats good! I think you're doing great and on the right track. Remember to stick to the plot and dont go astray and if you are changing the characters personality do it gradually not at once. Develop the character, makes it more realistic and belivable. To me realism is the main thing that makes a reader want to relate and want to read more and read on. So far so good. Keep up the good work and i hope this helped.
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RandomRequest yours or anybodies books to go check out. I'll critique or review it and if you want a shout out, I'll give you one. Any genre any type from fan fiction to paranormal. Ill do it all. This is completely based on my opinion and point of view. ...
