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You good? It's been a minute.

Not an update just wanted to ask a few things.

I'm going to be taking my time to edit Point of Menace and I want to know if chapter 33 and 34 should change.

It's not realistic at all and I know that now nearly an entire year later with more experience with this writing thing but I want to know you're opinions first.

Should I make Emme's first time more innocent or leave it like that and just edit it?

Should I change anything else, add anything? Please comment.

Do enjoy the rest of your day or night :).

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