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The title was really unique and captivating. But it wasn't too eye catching. If we read the book then there can be a better title . "Unlawfully his " can't attract many readers as the concept shown by this title is too common
Cover:- 5/10
The cover was neatly edited. There was a perfect colour scheme but the problem is with the pics used . It had both the main leads imprinted over it. But there can be something better which can show the plot . I think adding some quotes on it would be better
Blurb:- 7/10
The blurb was detailed and of perfect length. It showed a small summary of the book to create a spark of curiosity. But still it didn't reveal much about the real plot which will attract readers . I would suggest you add some dialogues of the characters as the voice of the characters provides a better understanding to the readers
Concept and plot :- 10/10
What can I say about it . It was really my first time reading something like this which shows its uniqueness. It was easy to guess as much information is given in the description but without reading the description nobody could guess what the plot is . It was interesting to read how a boy married a marine for his health expenses
Character information and character development:- 7/10
It mostly talked about the main leads jungkook and Taehyung. Their introduction was detailed enough to understand them . The side characters also play a crucial role in the book and all of them were well described. There was no doubt in the personality of any character. Their personalities were too close to be real . With the passage of time jungkook and Taehyung developed a bond with each other . There was a difference in their personalities in the end and that in the beginning
Pace :- 9/10
The pace was slow but steady. It was perfect but while reading on continuation days it can be a little boring. Sometimes you need to fasten up the days to make it look more interesting. Jungkook and Taehyung took a good amount of time to come closer to each other which is natural and realistic
Grammar and vocabulary:- 8/10
Such a strong grammar. It is really hard to find any type of error. All parts were well edited and there was really no mistake. But sometimes the use of heavy and fancy words changed the structure of the sentence. Sometimes you should use simple words for the better understanding of readers
Writing style:- 8/10
Writing style was pretty common but it made the book look like a real novel . Each and every scene was well described which was the best thing . Sometimes the use of the synecdoche was too fascinating to read . It focused on all the details which was impressive. 8 because it has lessened the readability
Overall impression:- 9 /10
All over the book was enjoyable, only focusing on the main plot . It was fascinating to read how persons married each other for different purposes but that wasn't the forced marriage like commonly in other types of books
Rating on book:- 7.5/10
Total:- 75/100
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