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◈ Title: 4/4 The title of this book is as unique as the book, the subtitle suits well.
◈ Cover: 3/4 The cover seems well-edited and neat. But not so eye-catching, you mentioned in the book about the appearance of the diary, you can make it look like that or you can make another cover.
◈ Blurb: 3/5 The blurb is a quick length. It describes the concept. Maybe you should add more paragraphs… or a quote, perhaps.
◈ Writing style: 10/10 The narrative of the book is from one perspective in the form of a diary, that’s pretty good and creative to think about.
◈ Grammar: 10/10 The grammar is good. I didn't find any errors or typos.
◈ Vocabulary: 9.5/10 The vocabulary you used is causal and narrative. The vocabulary really fits the atmosphere.
◈ Characters Development: 10/10 Characters have a good personality, I really was experiencing the feelings they have and the emotions they hold. It was perfect.
◈ Plotting: 11.5/12 The plot is like a teenage movie, I like the scenes, situation. It shows the struggle and emotions of Hazel. I would not say much because I don't wanna reveal the plot. Just know that plot is good!
◈ Emotions: 10/10 Emotions were perfect, there are no words that can describe how detailed the emotion was described.
◈ Creativity: 8/10 It was a creative presentation, you made this book just like an ideal diary. Maybe you can add a banner related to the story, it would look cute and organised.
◈ Worth reading: 9/10 As I said I really like the characters, it was like a teenage movie, relatable, and understanding.
◈ Overall impression: 8/10 Overall, everything is good! You just need to improve in blurb, and for cover… only if you want or else, it's really good.
➱ Total: 96/100
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